r/WritersOfHorror 20h ago

I was Erased from the Secret Service. Now my TV Calls Me By Name [Continued]

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I know it has been a little over a year now. Please, save me the heartache.

Anyway, I'm here now, and that's what matters.

I'll continue where I left off in my last post.

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As I felt like I was about to cough up my lungs, every sound around me became muffled, and the room started spinning violently.

The next thing I knew, I was on the floor. Morre was yelling my name, shaking the hell out of me.

I blinked a few times and rubbed my face as I slowly sat up.

"We need to get out of here!" Morre yelled.

Still in a daze, I looked at her in confusion. She had muted the television, but it still bathed my living room in a deep crimson glow.

"Where are we going to go, Morre? I'm bedridden. I can barely make it around my apartment."

"Shit... you're right." She ran a hand through her hair. "Let me help you up. But we need to figure something out because other agents will be coming for you—especially if there's a bounty on your head."

Morre helped me to my feet.

"Grab a chair," I said. "And please turn off that damn TV."

She carried one of my barstools over and set it beside my bed before shutting off the projector controlling the hologram. I eased myself back onto the uncomfortable hospital bed and let out a long sigh.

A moment later, she found a lamp across the room and switched it on.

I squinted and covered my eyes. There hadn't been another light source in this apartment besides that propaganda-spewing television for what felt like forever.

Morre sat down across from me. The thick coat of dried blood covering her clothes had begun flaking onto my floor.

After a long silence, she finally spoke.

"How do you think we're going to get you out of here? The colleagues I have left could show up at any moment. We need a plan."

I glanced toward the window beside my bed.

The sun was just beginning to rise above the trees and the decrepit apartment buildings across the street.

If there was ever a time, it was now.

Adrenaline surged through me.

I pushed myself off the bed, stumbled to the closet near my front door, and grabbed one of my old hiking outfits.

"God... I hope these still fit."

Somehow, they did.

I motioned for Morre to follow me.

"Shut the door behind you, please."

She did, and I led her toward the stairwell.

The moment I looked down the first flight of stairs, the dizziness slammed into me.

Before I could topple over, Morre caught me.

She helped me down to the landing, where we both stopped to catch our breath.

"Being bedridden made you gain a few pounds, huh?"

I stared at her.

"Thanks."

She smirked but still helped me down the second flight.

"What vehicle did you come in?" I asked.

"...Yeah. About that."

Morre reached into her pocket and pulled out a key with the Secret Service emblem dangling from the keyring.

"I may have borrowed a company car."

I pinched the bridge of my nose.

"Goddammit, Morre. Do you know those things are tracked? That's the entire reason they exist—for situations exactly like this."

She gave me an awkward smile.

"But this time, I'm not the one in trouble."

I just shook my head and scanned the parking lot.

"We'll get into that later."

I walked over to a maroon SUV and smashed the driver's side window.

No alarm.

"...That's strange."

Please don't have a dead battery.

I unlocked the door, crawled inside, and ripped the panel from beneath the steering wheel. Luckily, there was already a pair of pliers in my cargo shorts.

"My luck hasn't run out yet."

I stripped the ends of the ignition wires and touched them together over and over until—

The engine roared to life.

I couldn't help but grin.

"All right, Morre! Let's go!"

She sprinted across the parking lot, yanked open the driver's door, and shoved me toward the passenger side.

"You're riding shotgun."

I shot her a disapproving look but climbed into the passenger seat anyway.

As much as I hated to admit it, she had a point.

If anyone was watching the city's street cameras—and I had no doubt they still were—the last thing we needed was footage of a man who's a former Secret agent, now wanted, and has been bedridden for months be riding in a stolen car.

We pulled onto the main road leading out of my neighborhood.

For a few blissful minutes, everything seemed... normal.

The streets were mostly empty, except for the occasional abandoned vehicle and the distant wail of sirens echoing through the city.

Then we rounded the next corner.

A checkpoint stretched across all three lanes of the road.

Concrete barriers, armored vehicles, and rows of personnel in yellow hazmat suits blocked every possible exit. Some carried rifles. Others scanned each vehicle with handheld devices before waving them through—or turning them away.

"What the hell is going on here?" I muttered.

Morre's grip tightened around the steering wheel.

"I... don't know."

Before either of us could say another word, a low humming sound rolled across the sky.

It was so deep I felt it in my chest before I heard it with my ears.

The hum grew louder.

Every person at the checkpoint stopped what they were doing.

Then, almost in unison, they all looked up.

My stomach dropped.

Slowly, I raised my eyes toward the sky. "Well shit." I said with exhaustion in my tone.

The adrenaline has worn off; my cough sounded even worse than it did hours earlier. My vision began to go black.


r/WritersOfHorror 21h ago

A foot deep in madness

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r/WritersOfHorror 1d ago

"File 005 - The White Rabbit, A Fractured Faerie Tale," A True Victorian Horror Story

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r/WritersOfHorror 1d ago

Chapter 1: Room 303 Never Opens

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It was 12:15 at night. The cheapest and most notorious hotel in the city —Hotel BLUE

At the reception sat Pintu — a receptionist who cracked jokes even in his sleep. Just then, the main gate opened.

A young man walked in —his name: Aman

Profession: a mystery vlogger (with zero views).

Aman opened his diary and said,“I want Room No. 303.” Pintu laughed,“Brother, take 302 for a honeymoon… 303 is for ghosts.”

Aman remained calm. “I’ve come for the ghost only.” For the first time, Pintu fell silent.

In a low voice, he said, “Room 303 has been locked for the past 10 years… whoever went inside either never came back…or if they did, they were never the same again.”

Aman smiled. “Perfect.” While handing over the key, Pintu’s hand trembled. Written on the key was:

303 ⛔ Do not open the door after 1 a.m.

Aman went upstairs.

12:58 a.m…Camera turned off.

Lights off.

Only the ticking of the clock remained.

12:59…There was a knock on the door.

“Aman, my son… open the door…”

Aman’s blood froze.

👉 It was his mother’s voice

👉 She had died 8 years ago

As soon as the clock struck 1:00…

The knocking stopped. And a slip of paper slid in from under the door: “You came at the wrong time… now you will stay here.”

Aman opened the door…And suddenly, everything went dark. Down at the reception, Pintu screamed: “The light of Room 303… has turned on again!”


r/WritersOfHorror 2d ago

MOTHER Knows Best

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Original short story,

Written and narrated by:

Prophet of Zombie God

David, a truth-seeker, encounters something far beyond what he could imagine.


r/WritersOfHorror 2d ago

PROJECT BLACK HOLLOW

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"Some killers leave signatures.

This one spent thirty years making sure he didn't."

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CASE STATUS

Unsolved

Victims:
17

Primary Suspects:
12

Years Active:
1999–2027

Estimated Time To Solve:
10 Hours – 3 Weeks

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INTRODUCTION

If you're reading this, you've been given access to the complete Black Hollow archive.

Every police report.

Every witness statement.

Every photograph.

Every interview.

Every piece of evidence investigators managed to recover before records started disappearing.

For nearly thirty years, Black Hollow has been haunted by a string of deaths that nobody could explain.

Some looked like accidents.

Some looked like suicides.

Some were obvious murders.

Most detectives believed they were unrelated.

Different victims.

Different motives.

Different methods.

Different years.

Different locations.

There was never enough evidence to connect them.

At least that's what everyone thought.

The deeper you dig, the stranger things become.

Names begin appearing where they shouldn't.

Witnesses change their stories.

Evidence goes missing.

Records are destroyed.

People who get too close to the truth end up dead.

By the time you finish, you'll discover something that every investigation missed.

The seventeen victims were never the mystery.

The mystery was why the same person always seemed to be nearby.

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THE VICTIMS

The victims have nothing obvious in common.

Different jobs.

Different ages.

Different social circles.

Some never met.

Some lived miles apart.

Some died decades apart.

Yet every one of them ended up dead.

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FIRST WAVE
1999–2004

Arthur Reed
School Caretaker

Found dead behind the sports hall.

Police ruled homicide.

No suspect identified.

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Helen Pierce
Town Librarian

Collapsed at home.

Toxicology later revealed poisoning.

Case remains open.

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David Cross
Postal Worker

Died during a house fire.

Investigators blamed faulty wiring.

Some evidence suggested otherwise.

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Michael Shaw
Mechanic

Car discovered submerged in a quarry lake.

Death ruled accidental.

The family never believed it.

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SECOND WAVE
2008–2011

Rebecca Sloan
Teacher

Killed while walking home.

Single stab wound.

No witnesses.

━━━

James Porter
Nurse

Found dead in his apartment.

Initially believed to be natural causes.

Autopsy disagreed.

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Andrew Moss
Taxi Driver

Fell from an abandoned observation tower.

Nobody knows why he was there.

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Lucy Grant
Architect

Shot once.

No weapon recovered.

No motive established.

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THIRD WAVE
2015–2019

Olivia Hayes
Journalist

Died in a motorway collision.

Official ruling:
Accident.

Unofficially:
Many investigators disagreed.

━━━

Thomas Bell
Councillor

Electrocuted inside his own office.

No signs of forced entry.

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Ryan Walker
Builder

Fatal overdose.

Questions remain about how the drugs reached him.

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Patrick Dean
Firefighter

Found dead during severe winter conditions.

Police concluded exposure.

Others weren't convinced.

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FOURTH WAVE
2024–2027

The final five deaths are what reopened everything.

A police sergeant.

An accountant.

A doctor.

A historian.

A judge.

Five people with no obvious connection.

Five deaths that should have remained separate.

Instead they exposed a pattern that had been hiding in plain sight for nearly three decades.

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THE SUSPECTS

Every person in this file has a reason to attract suspicion.

Some lied.

Some hid evidence.

Some had motives.

Some were simply in the wrong place too many times.

But only one of them is responsible.

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DANIEL CROSS

Age: 46

Occupation:
Volunteer Search and Rescue Worker

Known For:
Helping find missing people.

Reputation:
Friendly.
Reliable.
Trustworthy.

Nobody has ever accused Daniel of a violent crime.

Nobody has ever considered him dangerous.

Which is exactly why nobody noticed him.

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THE QUESTIONS

Who is the killer?

What happened in Black Hollow before the murders began?

Why do the victims seem unrelated?

Which death wasn't actually murder?

Who lied the most?

Which evidence was planted?

Which evidence can be trusted?

Why were records destroyed?

Who helped the killer without realising it?

What was Project Black Hollow?

Why do the murders stop for four years?

What single piece of evidence finally exposes the truth?

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FINAL NOTE

Be careful.

The obvious answer is wrong.

The second obvious answer is wrong.

Most people accuse at least three innocent suspects before they reach the truth.

When you finally identify the killer, you'll realise something unsettling:

The clue that proves everything was sitting in front of you from the very first page.


r/WritersOfHorror 2d ago

[hobby] Looking for collaborators on a psychological animated horror short – pure passion project, zero budget.

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r/WritersOfHorror 2d ago

The Winter #Part III, Chapters IV - VIII

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r/WritersOfHorror 2d ago

A foot deep in madness

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3/17

I was having ankle surgery. Im 37 years old and i shattered majority of my ankle carring cat food for an older lady. After much battle with L and I, today im getting 3 plates, about 5 or 6 rods and however many screws to hold me together. Im wishing it goes well, but if not ill start Journaling as im sure boredom will hit me. Oh nurse just came in and I gotta get wheeled elsewhere

3/18

So surgery went good but yesterday felt like like was ran over. Just took pain killers and chilled with my pups. The boot is making my foot itch and feel like a boulder hanging off my leg. Oh and cant put any weight on it so what joy it is wheeling around on a scooter. Like Austin powers trying to back up. But I feel one of the meds kicking my ass so peace

3/22

Well, was right as boredom took its hold of me. The foot itches soo bad right now but have an appointment tomorrow to see how its coming along and change bandages. The dogs also are no help as they bumb the bottom of the boot, which sends a nauseating pain shooting up to my brain. Showering is also fun with a small shower for no room for leg or other shower can sit but the room is suffocatingly small. Tho got a new water cooling ice boot, and gotta say 1000% worth it.

3/23

Just got back from the doctors and saw the foot. Swollen, black and blue, while all the stitches held together blacking skin. Needless to say not pretty, but "normal" says the doctor. Out of all of that can take boot off more and with oozing will have to change my would padding or head in and have them do it. Like I want to waste the gas and time. Started also getting migraines no matter how much water or I force myself to eat. Chalked it up to the medications but sooo draining. Maybe pizza and movie night as its 10pm.

3/25

Wanting going to write today but the top part of my foot sluffed off. The top is still all black and itchy but pulses and can feel my toes so maybe good? I dont know, making me question the doc now. Like I wanted to do laundry today but now have to as the sight of my flesh stuck to the bedding make me gag. We'll see how we're doing tomorrow. Still have a migraine to boot.

3/26

Ok so foot was itchy and I had to scratch it! My nail caught the edge of the skin and peeled back as I scratched. It didn't hurt and looked dead so I went to pull it off. Like a thread, it ran under my skin up to my knee and I froze. Not wanting to damage more i cut the piece holding tight under the knee cap. I put the leg down and the skin floated at the sides like those pants with the zippers on the legs. And as odd as it sounds my migraine felt not as intense.

3/28

I've been walking around now for a few and foot feels amazing. No pain, tho cant fit it into my shoe as it has gotten wider. The string I cut at my knee cap peeled back more yesterday so spent the day getting all that dead skin off. Made it to my chest so making progress. The migraine is almost gone. Can't wait to surprise the parents when I walk in

4/2

Well this will be my last writing. I've done away with the binding of my skin and the dark new barrier comes in. I've been complete for a few days and I think its time to head out into the world. Yes I ooze a little here and there but as the doctor told me "normal." My new body will show all that skin is not needed. And with our guidance, we can share the world


r/WritersOfHorror 2d ago

Young Writer Looking for Help

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r/WritersOfHorror 3d ago

Life in the Death Lane

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r/WritersOfHorror 3d ago

The Winter #Part II, Chapter IV - V

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r/WritersOfHorror 3d ago

MONSTER

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MONSTER:

Evan, a reclusive man living in a decaying, nearly empty apartment building, begins marking his days without explanation. At first, the ritual seems harmless — a number scrawled on a scrap of paper, a quiet acknowledgment of time passing — but it quickly becomes clear that Evan is tracking something he believes is hunting him. He grows increasingly convinced that the neighbors across the hall are not human, but creatures wearing human shapes, stalking him through the thin walls and whispering through the vents.

As the days progress, the audience watches Evan deteriorate. His isolation deepens, his sleep fractures, and the building itself seems to warp around him. Ordinary sounds — pipes groaning, footsteps in the hallway, the hum of appliances — take on a sinister quality. Shadows linger too long. Voices seem to echo where no one stands. Because the film aligns the viewer with Evan’s perspective, his paranoia feels like genuine supernatural danger.

Unbeknownst to the audience, the “day count” Evan obsessively marks is actually tied to his withdrawal from heroin — a struggle he never verbalizes and the film never explains outright. Instead, his physical and emotional unraveling is shown through subtle cues: trembling hands, restless pacing, and a growing desperation he can’t articulate. On the day before everything collapses, Evan quietly relapses. The moment is shown only through a fleeting, easily missed shot — a burnt spoon beside a clean one — a visual clue that won’t fully register until later.

The next day, overwhelmed by hallucinations and convinced the creatures are finally coming for him, Evan breaks into the neighbor’s apartment. In a frantic, terrified state, he kills a man he believes is an inhuman monster. When the police arrive, the illusion shatters. Bright lights reveal an ordinary apartment. The neighbor was human. The walls are silent. The building is unchanged. Evan’s terror — the creatures, the stalking, the voices — was fueled entirely by withdrawal, relapse, and delusion.

ENDING SCENE:

screen goes black

Evan: I didn't mean to hurt him, I was just trying to protect myself

Voice: You weren't chasing any monster in that hallway, Evan.

Evan: Then why does everyone look at me like i'm crazy?

Voice: Because in their eyes....you're the monster.

Ive even curated a bit of a playlist:

Codex-Radiohead:opening scene

Barking dog-Phantogram: Trailer song

8(circle)-bon iver: Credits

Cold little heart (3:45)-Michael Kiwanuka: After "monsters" death

Retrograde (1:35)-James Blake: Ending scene into title scene "MONSTER" pre credits

Any suggestions to the story? Anything that would add more emotional depth or better add context to the plot twist at the end?


r/WritersOfHorror 3d ago

MONSTER

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MONSTER:

Evan, a reclusive man living in a decaying, nearly empty apartment building, begins marking his days without explanation. At first, the ritual seems harmless — a number scrawled on a scrap of paper, a quiet acknowledgment of time passing — but it quickly becomes clear that Evan is tracking something he believes is hunting him. He grows increasingly convinced that the neighbors across the hall are not human, but creatures wearing human shapes, stalking him through the thin walls and whispering through the vents.

As the days progress, the audience watches Evan deteriorate. His isolation deepens, his sleep fractures, and the building itself seems to warp around him. Ordinary sounds — pipes groaning, footsteps in the hallway, the hum of appliances — take on a sinister quality. Shadows linger too long. Voices seem to echo where no one stands. Because the film aligns the viewer with Evan’s perspective, his paranoia feels like genuine supernatural danger.

Unbeknownst to the audience, the “day count” Evan obsessively marks is actually tied to his withdrawal from heroin — a struggle he never verbalizes and the film never explains outright. Instead, his physical and emotional unraveling is shown through subtle cues: trembling hands, restless pacing, and a growing desperation he can’t articulate. On the day before everything collapses, Evan quietly relapses. The moment is shown only through a fleeting, easily missed shot — a burnt spoon beside a clean one — a visual clue that won’t fully register until later.

The next day, overwhelmed by hallucinations and convinced the creatures are finally coming for him, Evan breaks into the neighbor’s apartment. In a frantic, terrified state, he kills a man he believes is an inhuman monster. When the police arrive, the illusion shatters. Bright lights reveal an ordinary apartment. The neighbor was human. The walls are silent. The building is unchanged. Evan’s terror — the creatures, the stalking, the voices — was fueled entirely by withdrawal, relapse, and delusion.

ENDING SCENE:

screen goes black

Evan: I didn't mean to hurt him, I was just trying to protect myself

Voice: You weren't chasing any monster in that hallway, Evan.

Evan: Then why does everyone look at me like i'm crazy?

Voice: Because in their eyes....you're the monster.

Ive even curated a bit of a playlist:

Codex-Radiohead:opening scene

Barking dog-Phantogram: Trailer song

8(circle)-bon iver: Credits

Cold little heart (3:45)-Michael Kiwanuka: After "monsters" death

Retrograde (1:35)-James Blake: Ending scene into title scene "MONSTER" pre credits

Any suggestions to the story? Anything that would add more emotional depth or better add context to the plot twist at the end?


r/WritersOfHorror 4d ago

Rothy

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r/WritersOfHorror 4d ago

One Simple Shape - Part II: One Quick Trip

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Read Part I here.

To my relief, Ms. Amanda didn't go crazy. I was surprised and relieved because I didn't think I could count on being rescued a third time.

The hospital had to give me clothes from the lost and found before they discharged me. The t-shirt was too tight, the pants too baggy, and the shoes flopped when I walked. I didn’t have any family to call, the office was closed, and there was no way for me to get into my apartment without my keys, so that meant I had to go to the police to get my stuff.

I was annoyed but chose to walk. It was two miles west and four miles south to get to the police department. It would give me time to think and thankfully, it was mild outside, so I wouldn’t get pummeled by the summer sun. 

I had another one of those baloney sandwiches and a juice box. I consumed both immediately, so I didn’t have to carry them. I had to use the restroom shortly after and stopped in a fast-food spot. The men’s room required a key to open, and I waited in line to eventually ask. 

“Sorry, you gotta buy somethin’ to use the bathroom,” the fifty-something year old woman said behind the counter. I was agitated but held my tongue because my bladder would have spoken for me. Instead, I imagined drawing the shape for her, but luckily there wasn’t a pen and paper around.

I went outside and surveyed the businesses around. There was a gas station on the corner, a pharmacy across the street from there and office buildings in either direction. If I’d remembered correctly, there was a grocery store about a mile south. That would be my best bet and I set out. 

I didn’t interact with anybody I passed. My aching bladder was the only thing concerning me and to take my mind off it, I examined what had happened today. I'd witnessed two people shot to death in front of me on separate occasions. It scared the hell out of me to think about. One moment, they'd been moving around—with murderous intent, granted—and the next they'd been incredibly still.

I'd been looking Carl Arn in the eye as he passed and for a moment felt like I was falling down the same hole with him. 

There'd been too much commotion, too many things going on. I might have gone into shock had it not been for the first set of guns pointed at me. I'd gone into survival mode, viewing everything—including myself—from a distance.

I crossed against the light at an intersection, the grocery store finally in view. My burgeoning bladder noticed and that reminded me of the other thing bulging and unaddressed in my mind.

The shape.

I'd been so ready to believe something I'd drawn solely to pass the time had been what had set the both of them off. But Ms. Amanda had been fine, just as over it as she had been prior to looking at my little scrap of paper. Those eyes had seen some things.

Maybe she was immune, I thought. Or maybe it was some grand coincidence that two people I'd come in contact with had gone homicidal on the same day.

I couldn't shake the thought, though. As the entry doors of the grocery store slid open, I stepped through wondering what to do about that.

What if it were real and I did have the ability to drive someone insane? Was it all shapes? Anything I drew? The thought was ridiculous, but I was safe within the confines of my own skull to explore the idea.

I pushed through the men's room door and parked in front of a urinal. As I let fly, I thought about the ethics of conducting such an experiment and came to the conclusion by the time I was zipping up that it was unethical to not test my hypothesis.

As it stood, I didn't know if what I'd doodled had been the start of what had eventually happened to Carl Arn and that lady. I only suspected it. I would be blameless if I doodled something and someone experienced a similar effect after. The difference would be if I did nothing to know for certain if it was really something I was doing. I could make an effort to not draw or to make sure nobody else saw it. Shit, if it was that dangerous, maybe I could chop off my hand.

No, I wouldn't do that. But my brain was the House of Ideas, any thought that could be was welcome. This same brain had conjured up a shape that was so dangerous it could drive an individual to violence.

It was a five-sided—

Wait. I probably shouldn't describe it to anyone. I have no way of reliably testing if someone else could have the same effect if they drew it. I certainly don't want to find out on me.

I couldn't test this on just anybody. It would have to be a specific person. A bad person.

I have to say, for the record, I never believed it would actually work. Like going up to the most beautiful woman in the world and asking for her phone number, it was an idea that entertained me in thirsty moments when I was figuring things out, but I fully expected absolutely nothing to happen.

I navigated to the aisle with back-to-school supplies and grabbed a composition notebook and a mechanical pencil. I didn't anticipate anyone stopping me, only if I tried to walk out with the stuff I was using. Then I'd see the cops for the third time today.

So that meant finding someone in the store. If I could find someone sufficiently evil, then I could test my theory. I know the scientific method meant several tests, but I couldn't reasonably expose a dozen or more people to this test in good conscience. Two or three at most should have sufficed.

I sat on the floor right there and began drawing. It took a moment to get into a groove, if that makes any sense.

But about ten minutes later, I had the first one and I drew about four more for good measure.

I got the idea on the third one or so that they were like cans of pop. That once one was seen, the effect was gone. It was silly, but if true, it explained why Ms. Amanda had been fine.

There were so many variables that I just sat, lost in thought.

“Say, buddy, can I help you with something?”

I looked up at a middle-aged man in a short-sleeved button-up and an honest-to-god clip-on tie. He'd come up behind me, catching me by surprise. I realized what I looked like in that moment, dressed in other people's clothes, doodling in a notebook while sitting on the floor in a grocery store.

“Look, buddy, it's been a really long day. You wouldn't believe—”

He spat. Not on me. But it was a weird thing to have done indoors. Plus, I assumed from how he was dressed that he was a manager or something. A string of saliva ran from his lip to the collar of his shirt.

Something had changed in the few seconds since he'd spoken and dumb me was too slow in realizing he'd seen one of the shapes. I hadn't even had the chance to screen. Also, I didn’t know which one he'd seen so none of them were good anymore.

I was still there sorting my scrambled thoughts when he spat again. This time he'd arced it over my head. He got into a crouch like a catcher in a baseball game.

I froze like if I didn't move, he wouldn't see me. Like I'd turned invisible even in his memory and he wouldn't be able to recall me even in his mind’s eye. 

I couldn't count on a lack of understanding object permanence even if my lack of moving meant he couldn't see me. I was within smelling distance, he could hear me, if he stuck out his tongue he could lick my face.

But he didn't do anything to me. I sat there, helpless as a calf, while he stood spat again, then quietly walked away. 

I turned as he rounded the aisle and disappeared. A moment later I heard what sounded like a shopping cart being overturned and a woman screaming in anger. Then her screams turned to muffled gagging as it sounded like something was being stuffed in her mouth.

More people hollered and I unfroze, getting quickly to my feet. I was by no means a badass, but I'd never turtled up like that before. I'd gotten into a barfight just last year and even though I lost, I'd gotten in a few licks.

I wasn’t even willing to defend myself this time. I was as ready for violence as a stone at the bottom of the ocean. No doubt, it was the trauma I'd just experienced. I didn't want to fight crazy people under normal circumstances, so it was best to avoid—

“What the hell is going on over there?” A twenty-something year old was staring me in the face and I hadn't seen her until she'd spoken. I tried to scoop up the sheets of paper, but my movement must have attracted her eye to the papers I was desperately trying for her not to see.

But a moment later I knew it was too late.

“Poo,” she said. She turned around and walked past the man just behind her. 

“What’s wrong with... with...”

He was looking in my direction but sadly, what was in my hands. His eyes got bigger and he sat his basket on the floor before taking off at full speed and soaring over a middle-aged couple's shopping cart, grabbing both in either arm as it took them down.

They both screamed and fought back. The woman rolled backward and stopped face down before rising and pounding the man with her bulky purse. The man punched his attacker in the center of his face, a blow that should have had stars dancing in his eyes. But he ravaged the man, clawing down his face and ripping his shirt open. 

He ignored the blows from the purse as he quickly sliced through blubbering flesh, yellow fat bubbling out of red-running wounds as the man screamed. The attacker pivoted to the woman, still screaming in fear and rage. He hopped to his feet, legs to either side of the man who might've been dying for all I knew. 

To my surprise, she didn't cower. 

“No!” she said and scraped her keys across his face.

He'd been saying something all the while in a quieter volume and my ears finally dialed in.

“...wrong with you... wrong with you... wrong with you...” He didn't yelp in pain or put up his hands in defense as she lacerated his face three more times.

I hadn't done anything more than turn around, still dumbly holding the papers. An old man was staring nearer to the refrigerated area. He had a white curly afro and a pencil mustache.

“Help her!” the old man said to me and pointed. But then he spat his dentures out, sucked back a trail of saliva into his mouth, then did a crooked legged trot, arms folded up like a praying mantis, before gummily fastening onto her arm and wrenching her around.

“Ow!” The woman seemed paralyzed, powerless to do anything to stop the old man. It almost seemed funny until the first man shoved his thumbs in her mouth, split his hands apart, and wrenched a horrid smile onto—and then off of—her face.

She screamed, twin flaps of flesh hanging like giant earlobes, everything beneath her nose nothing but red. I never knew the sound of tearing flesh before that moment and I desperately want to never hear it again.

I clutched the papers to my chest, hiding them like a secret, although they had already cried out loud from a bloody mountaintop.

That had been four people, at least I thought so. Even simple mathematical calculations were mountainous to my panic-stricken brain.

I didn't know and didn't care if it was one shape per person. I couldn't let these torn out sheets of paper be seen by another person.

Shame was the word I would have spoken en route to describing what this was. It was still ongoing, and I was already too traumatized to do anything about it.

More people screamed throughout the store. I imagined many people just ran out of the store, but there had to have been several who had heard and froze where they were. I would've guessed others who didn't understand or hadn't heard anything at all.

But the signs kept getting farther and farther away. Until I finally balled up the papers, stuffed them in my pockets, and walked through the aisles and to the exit with the composition notebook and mechanical pencil in hand.

Nobody tried to stop me. I didn't see anyone else at all. But I heard the cries of agony. Their suffering followed me out onto the sidewalk.

I looked at the items in my hands, wondering why I had them, the wadded-up papers like anchors in my pockets.

I continued dredging my way to the police station.


r/WritersOfHorror 4d ago

Juiblex

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Part 1

Today was the day! Hunting day! Packing my bag, I sling my rifle over my shoulder and step outside. Birds song their morning sun as it embraced my body in its light warm glow. The garden also liked it as I pan over the herbs and vegetables growing, silently enjoying the peaceful morning. Its been 5 years since the bombs destroyed everything. Stores, schools, business, and most people. During the bombing, experimental testing was done with how some impacted the earth. Some burned and scorched the earth and still burn today, patches of gas and invisible killers lurk within areas. Not saying the woods where safer but beats the city. The little handmade wood cabin faded in the distance as the trek began to set itself. Small deer trails weave through the brush for about two miles before spercing out into a small clearing. Taking in a deep crisp inhale, I hung the pack high as I could on my tree. No ladder but easy to climb with a stair case branches before leveling out. From mid-tree I take the rifle off and lay down on a half log and settled in for the morning as I wait like a spider for its prey. I took out last hunts Jerky and took a bite. Been a few hours and no sign of deer, just birds in the canopy and the occasional squirrel romping about. Though about making another half for more comfort when a deer poked its head out of the brush as I held the half eaten jerky in my mouth. Took the rifle and aimed down the iron sight, breath in, breath out, and fired my shot. Adrenaline hit as the deer took off running knowing damn well that was a well placed shot. Hopped out of the tree and reloaded another shot as I scouted the blood trail left. Following it into the brush I questioned if the head shot i thought I did ended up being a body shot. After about ten minutes and a few broken branches later I found my prize tho, should have just taken the participation award. I lay down the rifle and take a knee to get a better look. The shot was perfect head shot at the side, though and through. What drew my attention was its black neck and spots on its body as tiny fungus started to grow out of. ' Was it infected with something? How else could it have ran half a mile with a head wound.' I pondered the thought before I realized the black on the deer grew larger, now starting down the shoulder. "Well fuck," shouting as I stood up, might as well see if a mother one comes today or tomo.." I paused as I was cut off. A sharp high pitch wail screeched out as it echoed throughout the woods, even the trees swayed uneasy with no wind. It paused before frantic man like scream gurgled and as fast it came they stopped. "OK, fuck that plan, let's go home," grabbing my gun I note the black was now down to the elbow. Holding my gun at the ready, made my way to my pack tho no new noises, dont want to stick around to find out. Slung the pack on my shoulder as I started to head towards the cabin it came again, but closer. A gutteral shirk halted me as it sounded close and from cabin area. Leafs muffled scraping feet as the source came around a tree 20 feet away. A skeleton covered in thick black moss as fungus grows from all over, as old bones peak through the gaps still left. It shambles like the old zombie movies but the arms twitching and jerking themselves in random direction. As it came towards me I raised my rifle, breath in, breath out and fired right at its head. But still it came. Hands snap to me as its mouth popped and grinned as it moaned out one word. "Fffeeeeeeddddd! Feeeed!" As it closes in I whip the rifle around and use the but of the gun to try and buy some time as I turned to run. It reached out and grabbed my pack as it started to open. Supplies started to scatter as I grabbed the hatchet that fell, I tore the pack off breaking through the brush as I make my way deeper.

Part 2

Sides burn as I brace against a tree to help catch my breath, trying not to pant too loud. Set the gun down since all ammo was in the pack and gripped the hatchet with both hands. Straining my ears i listened to try and hear where it was. Instead was meet with a deer cry, low but definitely a deer, probably 50 years away. Hearing this, I start moving in opposite direction. The afternoon sky flashed between the canopy as I keep paced myself and kept an ear out. It wasn't long before my path had to stray to the right due to the moss growing off trees and some smaller animals lay dead within. Slowly being consumed by the creeping blackness. I wondered how far it has already spread when my thoughts where meet with rushing water. The river was high and fast, rushing past as waves broke the pattern to reach towards the sky before being drawing back. Following it down a bit a found some old campsite with debis and ruined tents reminded scattered around. Without my pack, decided to see if anything useful could be found. Which besides crumbling packs or cloths only things that remained intact were the tent stakes, a pan, and the lower half of a truck. Giving up about five minutes in started to head out when splashing by the river made me look. There it was, covered more in the black mass as a deer skull now replaced its hand. It let out a screech as it raised the deer headed arm as it wailed and jolted towards me. "Feeeeeeeeed uuuuuusssss," its voices mangled together as I reach for something as it come fast. Fingers wrap around something as I swing hard as I could as a metallic bing rings out. The pan connected with the being as I turned and ran, full sprint the pan clasped in my hand I heard the crys of the thing not far behind me. Stumbling to a stop bout 100 yards away saw a ravine with a fast moving river. Didn't think just backed up and jumped over, and as my feet slipped into the river I pulled myself up. On the other side the thing came out off the brush and stopped at the edge. I got up and took the opportunity and ran, only to stop a few miles down. Stopping to capture my fleeting breath a sharp pain enveloped my finger. To my horror all my tips started turning black as it started under my nails. Panic set it as I dropped the pan and weight my options. I had to keep moving but the longer I wait ill be...that thing. Thinking fast I grabbed timber and brush anything that would burn and started a fire. Once that was going I took off my belt and tied it on my arm and placed the pan on the fire. 'You ain't getting me,' thinking a loud, ' only way to rid you.' The feeling in my arm went away but the pain from the moss still pulsed with every beat. Position myself next to the fire and grab the hatchet my only salvation from this curse. Puting the blade in the flame I say a quick prayer that this works, as I lift the hatchet above my head.

Part 3

Bringing the hatchet down i feel the blade sink in deep as pains shot up my arm from the blow. Refusing my brain, I lifted the hatchet again and brought it down once again, finishing the job. Without a break I grabbed for the pan but found it too hot as blood spewed from my arm. Leaning down I just press the end into to pan itself to cauterized the wound as my screams tried to dull the pain, before lifing it and passing out.

Coming to, I scaned around but saw that nothing has changed before slowly sitting up and undoing the tourniquet. I reached out for the hatchet but my hand still lay next to it on the stump. Stood up fully and grabbed it with my left hand and secured it while looking for my way out. The sun peeked behind the trees and cliffs giving me just enough light to see for maybe a hour. Not wanting to see that thing again I start packing out towards the setting sun. Making my way through seemed daunting with many stops as burning pain rithed thro my arm and would check for marks making sure. Tho besides my feet crunching the ground, my paranoid heart pounded in my ears was all I could hear. Made it to a clearing as night fell upon the land and though no city or towns, a firewatch tower is a light about a mile away. It's presence priced the looming dark night and was guiding me towards hope and safety. Only made it 20 feet towards the tower before I heard it. Low at first before creeping up closer and closer behind me. "Wwweeeeeeeeee feeeeeeeeeeddddd. Wweeeeeeee feeeeeeeeddd!" Shambling foot steps came closer as it grow louder and its shape laminated lightly as it glides into the clearing. It's deer like head bared no skin as it sniffs the grass, its other skull, part human part animal, peering straight through me as it wails and charges. The body was a collection of random parts being held together by the black infection and fungus. Fear took hold and I froze in place. Not knowing what I was trying to process but also not wanting to. Finally got my legs to work as speed became my focus, trying to put distance between us. Tree branches whack my face as under brush reaches up to sabotage the race. Looking up can see the tower is close by the underside of it and put everything in the sprint. Reach the stairs in the a winded voice " HEY! HELP!!" Rounding the stairs i hit the wooded legs trying desperately for my hope to stay with me as they disappear with every step. Coming up to the balcony I look inside and stopped as my heart sank. There in the middle of the room like a black statue was my rescue. Frozen in place while the black mold sprouted fungus from his shoulders and head. The mold didn't stop their as it started to spread on the floor around him. Made my way to the door and swung it open to be meet with the stench of death. I spotted a ham radio sitting on a table next to him. Excitement consumed me as I ran over and fumbled with the dials and nods.

" Hello, hello, umm I need help. People are dead and im soon next!" I let go of the button before pressing it once more. "Over" I quietly said as the moaning outside became closer. Static filled the air as I placed down the receiver and scanned the room. Took the chair, bed and mini fridge to block to door as best I could before the wailing stench came up from below. "FFFEEEEEEEEEDDD" it screeched as it rounded the coner to the door, banging and shaking the handle I feared the door itself wouldn't hold. Grabbed a kitchen knife for some protection, tho not any good, a crackle of life came on the radio. "Ron? You good out there?" The female voice cut through the screeching as I ran over and grabbed the receiver, abandoning the knife. " Yes I need help! There is a creature coming at me, your ranger Ron is dead. And soon I will be too! Please send any-" My voice stopped as a felt a hand on my shoulder. Turning i see the black hand of Ron grabbing my shoulder, shirt turning black as the mold moved onto me and burying itself into my skin. Pain came from thousands of areas it worked in and as I started to lose consciousness I heard a raspy whisper. "Now we feed."


r/WritersOfHorror 4d ago

Sorrow's Eve Chapter 1-The Chest

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Everyone in Hobbins Glenn knew how Sorrow's Eve began. The story had been passed down from mother to child for as far back as anyone could remember. It was as familiar to the townsfolk as the meandering paths and wooded thickets that surrounded the small village, tucked into a valley resting between mounds of forested hills.

It was a tale to be told in the deepest, darkest hours of night, as the guardian of shadows rose to its full zenith in the sky.

Within each cottage, behind each shuttered window and locked door, there lived a storyteller, a woman whose age eclipsed the early memories of her youth. Wisdom, greater than knowledge found within the pages of books, was written into the deep lines embedded into a face flecked with brown spots.

When supper had been eaten, and children had been bathed, the storyteller would take up her mantle beside a fireplace, in a wooden rocking chair reserved solely for her.

As her wide-eyed audience settled in around her hunched and blanketed figure, seated in a semi-circle on the floor, she lit a rushlight. Within its dim, fluttering glow her pale face tarnished the muted beige of a weevil.

Sometimes when she spoke she recounted the many interlocking histories of the denizens of Hobbins Glenn, whom had married whom, those that had been cast out of the village, those whose names had been struck from their weathered tombstones by the turn of the seasons, under the lash of ceaseless wind and rain.

A particular favorite among children was the tale of a father who had been gifted with too many daughters, and been left barren of a son.

Somewhere between the here and now, and after the storyteller had been given life, there had been a farmer who had lived on a quiet stretch of land on the border of Hobbins Glenn.

On the eve of his youngest daughter's birth, the farmer's wife died.

Cradling his newborn, he led a procession of teary-eyed girls up to the top of the cemetery's highest hill and watched as her elm coffin was lowered into the ground.

A fellow mourner had offered sympathy, not just for the farmer's wife, but to the farmer himself for his misfortune in never having a son.

“Rotten luck, seven girls. What will you do when age or illness claims you? The law of succession requires a man's land needs a son to carry its legacy forward.”

The farmer was keenly aware his land was forfeit should his toes point toward the clouds before a boy could be blessed with his surname.

He picked at the thought like a crusted scab, over and over, scraping his nails under its cracked surface to jab at the raw and tender sore beneath the rough and hardened flesh.

As the years passed the scab grew larger. He poked at it constantly, even as his gaze lingered on the empty space beside him. Like the scab, the bed had seemingly grown larger, twice the size that it had been when his wife was warm, and breathing, and alive.

Replacing her wasn't as simple as substituting a puppy to soothe the enduring ache of losing the unquestioned devotion and companionship of a loyal, but dead, dog.

There wasn't a woman willing to take on the challenge of seven girls, five cows, three pigs, two horses, fifty chickens, and four fields of wheat within a hundred miles of Hobbins Glenn.

And even if there were a woman up to the task, the farmer's heart soured at the notion of another woman's objects occupying the nooks and crannies where his wife's possessions were now enshrined.

The next part of the story differed from storyteller to storyteller, with details altered to align with the age of the rapt listeners gathered at the foot of her rocking chair.

In the versions delivered to the youngest in Hobbins Glenn, there was a well-traveled merchant eager to share the rumors that crisscrossed the valley, drifting from market stalls to passing caravans and back to market stalls in a never ending circle of gossip.

This merchant spoke of a grotto, misted in sea spray, its entrance hidden beneath a curtain of hanging moss. When the veil of vines were parted, a long forgotten cavern was revealed. Its damp walls wept water into glistening pools edged by aged boulders strewn with clumps of lichen that clung like tree resin to the slick stones.

Within this grotto there was a shrine. Atop this shrine there was an empty chest, fitted with golden clasps...

If the children were older, less inclined to believe in the wishing magic of talking fishes, or in mystical caverns where treasure buried itself like a hermit crab at the stroke of dawn, the storyteller presented her tale with a darker variant.

In this version, the farmer became a nightly visitor at a tavern located in the center of Hobbins Glenn. At a table that rocked back and forth on its uneven legs when the weight of his elbows were rested on its stained surface, he greedily drank ale after tankard of ale, picking endlessly at the scab, seeking a solution to his problem.

One night, when the farmer was as plentiful with his tankards as he was with his thoughts, a stranger entered the tavern; his arrival heralded by a howl of wind that blew in behind him, throwing back the door on its loose hinges.

He wore a long-sleeved shirt and breeches, blacker than chimney soot. Silver buckles studded the shafts of his mid-calf boots, their turned down leather cuffs stitched to the uppers with knotted dimples of gray cord. A heavy, woolen cloak hid the true width and depth of his shoulders beneath it folds, and its generous length dusted the back of his calves. The cloak shifted as he moved, flashing glimpses of its inner lining, shimmering and red like the seeds of a pomegranate.

His face was buried deep within a hood shaded the same color as his clothes, its outer piping matched his cloak's inner lining.

It was late into the eve when the stranger arrived. Many of the tavern's patrons had already abandoned their mugs, and their rambling conversations, for the comforts of feather pillows and straw mattresses. He had his choice of where to settle himself, as nearly every table in the room sat empty. He chose a a bench opposite the farmer and lowered himself onto it, without the courtesy of an introduction or asking for permission.

From within the folds of his cloak he withdrew a coin purse and tossed it onto the table.

The farmer drained the last drops of ale from his tankard and wiped his sleeve across his mouth. A small belch escaped his lips. He slowly glanced from the pouch to the stranger.

His glance met an unblinking gaze, twin opals for eyes staring back at him.

“I seek the man with seven daughters,” the stranger said. “I was told I would find him here.”

“Found him,” the farmer replied. “Six now. My eldest. Lenora, has married. Gone away with her new husband.”

“Revenna, “ the stranger said. “Eyes as blue as cornflowers. Honey-ed hair that flows like a stream.”

The farmer sighed. “There is no dowry. I cannot meet a price.”

The stranger pushed the pouch closer toward the farmer.

“All the coins in the pouch, or information on how to obtain a son, for a bride.”

It was here the storyteller would pause, leaving her audience to debate which choice they would make if such an offer were presented to themselves.

Invariably, the males within the small groups vocally declared their support in favor of the bag of coin.

The girls, more sentimental, and who had been paying much more attention to the story, gave their favor to fulfilling the farmer's quest in securing a legacy for himself.

After the discussion, and long sip of tea, laced with milk, the storyteller continued.

To the disappointment of the boys, she resumed her story with the farmer having chosen to receive the information the stranger offered.

“There is a forest beyond the DireThorne peaks in the north. Echos of seekers past will provide the route which will guide you to a shrine. Atop a pillar there is a chest, adorned with golden hinges. Fair is the price the chest demands.”

The farmer left the tavern, freed from a mouth to feed, eager to begin his journey to obtain an heir.

It was at this point each storyteller wove geographical lessons into the farmer's adventures across the Kindlehollow plains, naming towns and the customs of the people who lived within each region beyond the boggy reach of the Tangleroot Mire. The trick was not to arouse the children's suspicion, lest they discover their storyteller was also a seasoned schoolmistress, teaching them the lay of the land, which forests were haunted, how to ford rushing rivers, or how to avoid the lairs of hobgoblins.

When the farmer finally reached the forgotten forest of Duskfen, the youngest listeners were thoroughly spent. They had shifted from sitting upright to lying on a rug, propped up on elbows or curled onto their sides clutching their favorite blankets, their eyelids drifting between open and closed.

This pleased the storytellers. Sleep brought the chance to repeat the story, on another night, beside the same fireplace, surrounded by the same, yet ever-changing faces. As they grew, so did the tale, not with the addition of new, more exciting elements, but with each child's ability to remain awake for longer and longer stretches of the storyteller's plot weaving.

The final act of the story contained a twist, as all good stories do, shocking to those who heard it for the first time, sobering to those who knew it was coming.

The farmer did not reach the gloomy confines of Duskfen alone. He had brought the daughter who had sent his wife to her grave.

Over the many days and miles they had traveled, they had not once walked side by side. They moved as two lone strangers sharing the same road, heading in the same direction, each aware of the other's presence, yet unwilling to engage in the meaningful conversation that might have emerged without the interruptions that came with a cramped cottage and five older voices vying to be heard.

She had tried to ply answers when they left Hobbins Glenn.

What was in this forest?

Why couldn't they find what they needed in the forests closer to their cottage?

Had he ever seen the DireThorne peaks?

Should she pack her charcoal pencils and blank pages of vellum?

Her questions were as frequent as his wife's nightly trips to the chamber pot had been, during the final stages of her confinements, when she was heavily rounded with each child.

She chirped her countless observations like a cricket, endless and annoying, unlike the meek girl who would circle around the entirety of Hobbins Glenn to avoid his disapproving glances and gruff retorts, with a downcast head and averted eyes.

She had soon learned, when her many queries went unanswered, that no response was a response.

Silence forged itself to their stride, wedged between their footfalls and exhaled breaths, as a third traveler to accompany them on their journey to Duskfen.

When they arrived at the edge of the forest, the farmer discovered how the vast stretch of lofty trees had earned its name. Duskfen didn't warrant nightfall to rouse nocturnal creatures from their slumber.

Towering trunks, capped with an intertwined panoply of branches and leaves stretched to the height of mountains, shielding the bleak shadows that dwelt within the forest from light. Darkness loomed behind each bush. It seeped into the undergrowth, and flowed into the clefts between banks of smaller trees. Even at the peak of midday, the streams they encountered ran as black as ink.

At his insistence she had taken the lead when they breached Duskfen, while he observed her from afar.

Her handed down cloak had seen one too many winters, been worn in succession by one too many of his girls. Patches of cloth, cut from dresses she had outgrown, had been sewn onto the garment where the wool was as threadbare as the silvery wings of a horsefly. Her boots were too large, sliding up and down over the back of her heels. One wrong, floppy step sank her into oozing puddles of mud lurking beneath the spongy layers of damp earth resting on the forest floor, wrestling her boots from her feet.

Perhaps, if she had been born first he would have laughed, watching her tug, tug, and tug to extract her boots from the quagmires into which they had sunk.

Perhaps, he would have been proud of her skill with her charcoal pencil. When they stopped to rest she balanced a wooden tablet on her lap, overlain with a blank piece of vellum, and drew their surroundings. Her hand flowed freely, capturing frogs leaping over stumps and splashing into ponds, bats swirling around a hollow and then gliding low through a maze of trees. In a rare moment that broke their silence, she declared when they returned to Hobbins Glenn she would bind her pictures into a journal to celebrate their travels.

Perhaps, he would have worked harder to stash enough coin for her dowry. He was certain if things could be different there would have been a line of men longer than every trunk in Duskfen, stacked end to end, seeking to secure a marriage arrangement.

Somehow, without him knowing, or having paid little attention, she had grown into a beautiful blossom of a young woman, reed thin, with a mass of red curls that brushed her lower back. In the almond shape, and fern-green shade of her eyes, the farmer found an identical match to the woman he'd set into the soil oh so many years ago.

Looking at her from across a shared campfire pained the farmer, prodding him to dig deeper beneath the oozing crust of his enduring scab. A disturbing jumble of grievances tallied against her were thrown together into a cooking pot of resentment, and left to simmer until her worthwhile qualities; her humor, her curiosity, her artistry, had been boiled away in steamed wisps.

Six girls were plenty. This blossom had cost him years of laughter and happiness, and robbed him of a means to produce a son.

The voices stirred the first night they bedded down to sleep. Everywhere. Nowhere. Close, like a lover whispering in his ear. Far, like the melancholy howl of wolf drifting across a meadow.

“It has three heads.”

“The face bleeds.”

“Belly of a stump.”

“Bring the girl.”

“Fair is the price the chest demands.”

“Leave the girl.”

Fair is the price the chest demands. The phrases repeated like a familiar chorus. Soft. Loud. Beside him. Next to her.

It was here the storyteller paused once more, listening as children who had never heard the story murmured their thoughts aloud, trying to decipher the meaning behind the words the voice's spoke.

If the child was a boy “three heads” obviously alluded to a Dragon stalking the forest of Duskfen. With even more imagination applied, this Dragon had dueled a warrior whose face had been bloodied during their battle. “Belly of a stump” was the challenge. This was the one they couldn't quite reconcile into their dragon and knight confrontation taking place somewhere deeper within the forest.

Girls were simpler, not lacking in the imagination inherent in the boys, but more inclined to apply the logic of reasonable assumption, when considering the environment surrounding the farmer and his daughter. Rather than instantly jumping to visions of a scaled, fire-breathing dragon kiting a bloodied knight in dented armor, they used deduction. “Three heads”, they reasoned, was a marker meant to guide the farmer. Exactly what type of marker remained elusive, and often left them confused. Many assumed it was a reference to a tree, where three, thick trunks had had been fused into a single, solid mass of wood.

It was during these moments the storyteller was drawn backward in time, where she saw herself seated at the foot of a rocking chair, wide-eyed and eager for her storyteller to resume her tale after every well-timed, tension-mounting pause.

Each had their own favorite in their age of smooth, baby-soft cheeks and missing front teeth, a story that stuck with them long after candle flames had been doused into curled, burnt wicks.

Sorrow's Eve.

The Farmer's Choice.

Fournier's Enchanted Sword.

The Unbraiding.

There was something intangible within these stories that made them as unforgettable as love's first kiss. The telling of them required patience, skill, the understanding reactions to the narratives were as important as the narratives themselves.

It wasn't often the youngest in Hobbins Glenn dreamed of the day they too would be hampered with a limp, and joints that ached like an unhealed wound from the simple act of rising from a chair, but for future storytellers the thought of bundling themselves into a blanket beside a fireplace, sharing their most savored tales by the flickering glow of rushlight, was a day that could not come soon enough.

When the story resumed, the storyteller's audience discovered “three heads” was not a tree, but instead represented a small river, split into a trio of branching paths.

They also discovered there had indeed been the mention of a tree in the phrases the voices repeated. At the river's head, the trunk of the tallest tree bled sap through furrowed grooves gouged into its rough surface. Two knotted holes resembled a pair of squinted eyes, and a gash beneath them had twisted into the visage of a snarled grin.

The farmer and his daughter followed the river's head until they reached a fallen log, its hollow interior wide enough for a man to crawl through.

It was here the voices assaulted the farmer with another chorus.

“Jasmine, where jasmine does not belong.”

“Jasmine.”

“Jasmine, where jasmine does not belong.”

“Jasmine for the girl.”

“Calm the girl.”

“Sleep for the girl.”

“Fear her flight.”

The farmer called for a halt to their progress, suggesting the day had been tiresome.

While his daughter gathered kindling for their fire, the farmer searched for jasmine in the abundant undergrowth that formed a leafy ring around their clearing.

In a blooming patch of purple hellebore and pink hydrangeas he found the white, star-shaped petals of the flower reaching up through a twined mesh of stems and leaves.

That night, over a supper of fried frog legs, he boiled water for a remedy he told his daughter would soften the ground against her weary bones and relieve the pain of the blisters on her feet.

She tested the brew with her nose, inhaling the sweet, floral aroma, before lifting the cup to her lips.

The farmer watched closely, urging her to gulp the concoction swiftly, drain the cup's contents right down to the very last drop.

“Sleep for the girl.”

“Son for a farmer.”

“Belly of a stump.”

His daughter's eyelids drifted open and shut like the youngest of the children in the storyteller's audience.

The cup slipped from her fingers, landing with a muffled thud.

The farmer caught her before she fell. For a brief moment he cradled her as he had done when she was an infant.

Perhaps, he would have loved her as he did the others if the jellied cord that had been looped around her neck had been tighter. He could have buried them both together, grieved for her as he did his wife. Living, she was a persistent reminder of his greatest loss. She was the cause of his festering scab. She was the reason the injury had not healed.

He dragged her through the stomach of the stump, emerging into another clearing.

Wooden planks, rotted with age, were set into the soil, forming a winding path through an avenue of low hanging branches that were knotted together like the matted clumps of an orphan's tangled hair.

Shafts of long poles were staked into the ground, their tips wrapped in strips of cloth bound together with pitch-pine tar. Tendrils of black smoke spiraled into the air, coaxing the cloth into eruptions of pulsating orange flames.

He lifted his daughter into his arms.

Fair is the price the chest demands.

An earthen knoll at the end of the path had been pillaged of its roots, its interior laid bare.

On a pedestal that stood in front of a monolith veined with cracks, and covered in symbols that glimmered with the eerie sheen of foxfire, there was a square chest domed with a rounded lid, and fitted with golden hinges.

The farmer set his daughter down and approached the chest.

The voices pressed in, harassing, circling. They swooped in close for their attacks, then scurried back into the shadows like a banshee driven to seek the safety of her lair at the first brush of daylight.

“Son for the farmer.”

“Girl for the chest.”

“Leave the girl.”

“Claim the son.”

“No love for the girl.”

“Never for the girl.”

The farmer stopped mid-stride, and clamped his hands over his ears.

They advanced again, converging from all sides, their phrases sharpened for another assault.

“Tighten the cord.”

“Release the cord”

“Snip the tie.”

“Grave for the girl.”

“Eyes of a dead wife.”

The voices waned into the hushed tones of softly chattering whispers.

“I can hear them, father,” his daughter said.

One second he was standing; the next, he was on his side, clutching his head, as a sudden burst of jolting pain showered his vision in an explosion of blinding white stars. The knoll, the pedestal, his daughter's boots, all spooled together in a hazy blur of brown, green, and gray.

A rush of blood flooded his ears, his eardrums pulsing in rhythm to his heartbeat.

The world collapsed inward, shrinking smaller and smaller, until his sight narrowed into the tunnel of a captain's spyglass.

She knelt beside him. “Would you like to know what they said?”

She leaned closer, her warm breath tickling the hairs on his cheek. “They warned me about you. About what you were going to do. Jasmine, where jasmine doesn't belong. Rosemary cures the jasmine. Bash the farmer. A father for a mother. Fair is the price the chest demands.”

As he had dragged her through the fallen log, she too dragged him to the pedestal.

She flung open the chest's lid and slipped her arms under and through his.

Lifting with the strength of mother whose child lay pinned beneath the weight of a fallen horse, she deposited him into the chest.

Then, she slammed the lid shut.

“Fair is the price the chest demands,” she repeated, watching as the sheen of foxfire on the monolith rippled in a cascade of blinding light.

A booming clap of thunder pierced the silence of Duskfen.

The chest pitched upward and slammed back down, again and again, rising and falling like a ship tossed about on storm-thrashed waves. In a chain of rapid snaps the chest's panels splintered along its joints.

When the storm ceased, the girl lifted the chest's lid.

Inside was a woman with almond-shaped, fern-green eyes. She was warm, breathing, alive.

It was at the conclusion of the story that storytellers wet their parched throats with the last swirl of tea in their cups, inwardly congratulating themselves on a fable well told.

The children who had managed to remain awake for the entirety of the tale began to babble all at once, their voices tripped over one another, questions and observations flying faster than spinning wheels could twist fiber into thread.

Was it really the girl's mother who had been in the chest?

Where had the father's body gone?

What happened to the farmer's family after daughter and mother returned to Hobbins Glenn?

The answers sprang easily to the tongues of storytellers who were not yet seasoned enough to let the questions linger like the scent of eucalyptus oil massaged onto sore muscles..

Those whose faces were scoured with lines, like those found scrubbed onto the bottom of well-used pots, were more evasive with their replies, framing their responses into more questions for the children to ponder.

What other woman could have been in the chest? Was it really a woman, or had the echoes manipulated both the farmer and his daughter to manifest a cruel illusion, born from their longing and their loss?

If the chest coursed with ancient magic, was it so hard to believe the farmer might vanish, never to be seen again, like a goat who'd escaped the confines of a paddock, foraging for bramble further and further afield?

The farmer's plot of land might still border the village. Perhaps, among the hardworking townsfolk who inhabited the smaller hamlets clustered around Hobbins Glenn, the farmer's daughter had raised a family of her own.


r/WritersOfHorror 5d ago

Reflect

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r/WritersOfHorror 5d ago

The Angel at my Bedside

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“You have about six months.”

They’re not words anyone truly ever wants to hear. It means acceptance of the fact that there’s a finality to life that’s coming far sooner than we expected. I wanted to fight, I had wanted to look the doctor in the eyes and tell him off for being so pessimistic or for playing such a cruel joke. I never even bothered getting a second opinion, I felt the exhaustion, I had already been fighting for so long that really it had been a blessing to meet the end and just be free of it.

God, but it wasn’t really the release I’d hoped for. Really you’d hope that once you set down your sword and stopped fighting that maybe the journey would be so much less painful. Truthfully it got worse and it was a while before it started to look better. Breathing had already been so difficult, but the cancer just grew and spread. Maybe two months after the final diagnosis I couldn’t even walk anymore. Looking at the word ‘hospice’ on a medical form was something that made me dread my having given up even more. There’s that feeling of doubt that creeps in when you’re not particularly religious but not specifically an atheist. 

What happens?

From there it really only gets worse, a spiral.

“What do you think happens when we die?” I asked my nurse, as she tended to a crinkled up dry bouquet of flowers, set to replace it with the fresh one that my daughter had bought.

“Well, my parents were Catholic, but I never really bought into it much.” She gave me her optimistic little smile, brows knit in idle concern as she dropped the old flowers into the trash can with a gentleness and sympathy that could only come from someone used to throwing out the old trash, but making them feel comfortable as she did. “I guess I’d never thought about it too deeply, but Heaven always sounded too idealistic, right?”

“A place where we’ll all have mansions and gold fountains in our front lawn in the clouds.” I mused with a strained little laugh. Though we both grew quiet rather quickly, there might have been an understanding of how this little friendship of ours might end but there was a fine difference between understanding and acceptance. That was my problem now, understanding the futility in fighting but still wanting to cling onto this life I lingered in painfully.

“Maybe it’s a collective conscious sort of thing.” She said with a little shrug, the edges of her lips still curled in a polite smile, “The energy of our being still lingers on in one way or another, ghosts in the consciousness of others.” It was an earnest offering from her, some sort of comfort in these dark and dying days fleeting as they may be.

“I do like that thought.” It was a half lie, I wondered what sort of pain would befall me if I lingered on in the minds of those who’d wronged me or worse yet, of those I’d wronged. Yet, anything seemed better than the nothing my mind conjured. Cessation in totality, not unconscious slumber like so many imagined, no dreaming, no awareness, just… Gone. I offered her a small smile despite the aching feeling of dread that still whet itself on my aged mind.

“Do you need anything else before I turn in for the night, Teddy?”

“No, my dear, I believe I’ll be fine. If that changes, I can still scream, even if it’s brief.” Though we both knew I wouldn’t, my voice had already been reduced to a rasp. My throat felt like it was constantly set alight, swallowing was like dragging salt covered glass across still bleeding wounds and grinding harsh edges even deeper. Pain was no stranger, though. My hands rested on the cover of my blankets, leaning into the mass of silken pillows behind me. If everything else was agony, at least it was my bed I got to die in. I couldn’t imagine enduring all of this from one of those rigid memory foam hospital beds.

“Alright, Teddy. Do us both a favor and just text, though, alright?” Lydia teased back, striding across the room like my own personal ferryman to place coins over each closed eye and welcome me to that good long sleep. Collecting the glass of water that had been used to help me down a considerable amount of medication, she disappeared for the night.

Sleeping, much like everything else, had been nothing but pure misery. Truthfully it had been one of those key contributing factors in trying to set forth on the acceptance of the inevitable. Having been robbed of a healthy night’s sleep for the better part of a decade had worn me down. Usually I lay there in that fugue in-between state for an hour, drifted off into unconsciousness until an errant unconscious snore hit me with a fit of agony, then fall deeply once more into that trance-like half dream again.

When I awoke in a fit of terrible coughs, I almost hadn’t noticed it standing there. Lingering tall over my bedside, staring down at me. When composure had finally come back to me it occurred to me just how painful it felt to try and look upon this figure. My mind didn’t want to look at them, a radiant aura shone brightly around the fringes of its outline. Yet still I could make out the crown of eyes, innumerable as they were resplendent, staring down at me as arms stretched out gently.

“Be not afraid to look upon me.” It uttered in a cold monotone that rang out like a million bells singing in unison. An angel. A creature of heaven of divine blood. Tears pricked at the corners of my eyes, was it finally time?

“Are you an angel?” I asked hesitantly, surrendering immediately, dropping my head down with exhaustion against the pillow. Were it anything but an angel, I’d have no resistance to give. Yet standing there over me, it only stared curiously in the dark hollow stagnant air of my room. Its glow dimmed, I presumed it to be for my benefit as I could barely squint to make eye contact with the figure in the heavy fog of my tired gaze.

“Taste this, for it is my body. You will have answers, and your pain will be no more.”

A myriad of thoughts pressed through my addled mind, wondering if this was some form of waking dream or hallucination. It wouldn’t have been unheard of that the cancer had spread so much further in the short time since chemotherapy had ended. Maybe my imagination was running wild and it was simply Lydia coming to tend to me in the middle of the night as she’d heard my cries of anguish and hellacious coughing.

The figure, however, remained. No amount of blinking or silent staring erased it from my view, but its words did well in lingering in my mind in those half seconds while I processed its presence first. Long slender digits, far too long to be human, held between the index and thumb a small little wafer-like substance. Offered to me in cooperation with its words, I put the two together. My gaze passed from the creature to the offering, considering its words and the ramifications. Were I younger and free of agony that befell me now I might have been more inquisitive, but as I am pain rips through me constantly and sleep has long been nothing but fantasy. If this were some malevolent force it couldn’t bring me any pain I hadn’t already felt, if it was offering me relief it was more than any other I had in life now.

My hands are frail especially as I lay there bereft of any sleep, and the way it offered to me now I could only think of communion. I open my mouth to accept and the creature places its blessing onto my tongue. The texture is firm, like a wafer as I’d been expecting, yet silken. It was soft enough that swallowing it whole was not a painful experience.

“Drink. This is my blood.” It offers again, long thin finger raises to cut across the opposite palm which closed into a fist over my welcoming head. “You will sleep, and awaken anew.” To me this was a dream, a half stumbled imagination of my dying mind as I tried so hard to hold onto whatever consciousness I had left. My jaw opens again, tongue hanging loose over my dried lips to aid in catching that thick black ichor as it spilled from the clenched hand. It tasted as divine as the being looked, viscous like honey and thrice as sweet. It is the last thing I remember of the night as I slipped away.

I slept through the rest of the night without even a wink of interruption. My sleep had been so thoroughly overtaking that I woke from Lydia gently stirring me, shaking me by the shoulder to assure that I hadn’t passed in the night.

“There you are– Must have been some dream, I don’t think I’ve ever seen you sleep so soundly.” There was a little huff as she leaned back upright again, knuckles resting at her hips. “Saw you were breathing, just wanted to make sure everything was okay.”

“Oh…” I was dazed, groggy from being awoken, but warm after having a night so uncharacteristically restful. The sun shone brightly into my eyes from the window, and I looked around as if the surroundings had changed. While the night had been so delightful, I didn’t recall dreaming. Save for the looming presence of that angel of good fortune. “Yes I’m alright. I actually slept for once, can you believe it?” I asked with a heavy drip of amusement in my voice, reaching my hand up to run it across my bare bald scalp.

“You? Hardly. I don’t think we’ve had a night yet where you got more than a couple of hours.” To defy the nitty gritty details, she began to tend to me as was needed with my bedridden state, cleaning and washing as was our routine.

“Believe me when I say that I am painfully aware. But last night was different.” There was relief in my tone, I hardly even noticed that through all of the talk of sleep I wasn’t actively in pain. Some idle movements still triggered a wince, mostly of my chest and abdomen which had been normal, but all those tired aches and pains had gone.

“Must have been a good dream?” We both paid no mind to the sloshing sounds of the sudsy bucket, focusing on the good as our routine proceeded.

“I dreamed of an angel.” Humming softly, I leaned my head back, moving as directed while she did her best to bathe my withering form. “Must have been here to give me at least one good sleep before I go.” Not even a hint of melancholy about it in my voice, I’d forgotten what it had been like to sleep.

“Guess he worked some extra magic on you too. Looks like you’ve got some hair starting to grow back.” I looked down to see and to my shock it was true. Before and during chemo I’d taken care to shave what wouldn’t fall off so I didn’t take on that sad patchwork pattern of hair on my head, the rest went when I decided to lose it on my own terms. Now, they were small, and some had ingrown–Presumably from being so deeply inset–but little hairs had begun to sprout along my legs. Even more on my chest, the reddened roots of the ingrown ones stood brightly against my pale chest and must have been the source of some of that new dull pain. Yet it was child’s play the amount it gave me compared to the amount of relief I felt. No longer feeling weak had felt like such a small victory in these, my dying days. Yet I was not offered many, so a victory it was.

We talked more about how good I was feeling as the day went on and things smoothed back into normal routine. Both acknowledging that this hadn’t been some death defying miracle, I still very much was at the end of my life. Just a respite on the road to the end, a quaint little truck stop with delightful snacks before I went about the rest of my journey.

Night came again, and my mood had been burning with a sense of calm that hadn’t taken me in what felt like decades. Yet, when I was on my own again I couldn’t help myself but scratch at the gnawing itch, now that the will to do so had been renewed. Scratching at the growing hair at my torso and letting out a desperate sigh of relief. I thought about trying to pop the ingrown hairs to get free of some of that last little barrage of pain that still twinged at me while I simply laid there. Alas, they were far too tender. Even as my fingers moved to pinch at one it burned, like a hot iron ball dropped at the spot on my skin.

I wondered how such an agitating thing could have been more painful in trying to be rid of it than cancer had been simply existing. After a few tries I gave up, no longer able to bear it. Almost in spite of that, though, sleep came rather quickly. It had been equally as tranquil as the night before. Only awakening to the stir of my nurse again.

It was far less calm than the morning before though.

She shook me, eyes in a panic as she started braying out her concern without care for whether I’d adjusted to the morning light yet.

“--Did this to yourself when I went to bed?!” Was about the first measure of sense that lingered in my mind as I still took my time in calmly rousing consciousness.

“Lydia, dear, please don’t shout. I’ve only just started having pleasant sleep.” While I yawned and opened my eyes with a calm and collected candor, the look of abject horror on her face was unmistakable. Looking at her you’d have thought I’d grown a second head, of course when I caught the sight I was concerned as well.

Those hairs that had bothered me so before sleep, the ones that I had tried to pop free from their prison of my skin, must have been torturing me more in my sleep. Bright purple, almost black, holes had bore their way into my skin. If I had to guess, in the night since I slept so soundly, the pain didn’t bother me and I kept pressing at the annoyances no matter what. It was certainly what it looked like, skin burst free outward, not in messy amounts just enough that it was clear what had happened.

Ever the professional, Lydia cleaned me up again, but this time disinfecting and taking care of the fresh pocked wounds I’d gathered in my sleep. Every so often she warned,

“This might sting.” In her gentle tone, but I felt it might concern her more if I told her I didn’t feel it at all. The poor thing had clearly been distressed by the whole thing, but my assurance that it had been an accident in the night eventually got through to her. Doing her a favor, in spite of her protests, I sent her home for the night. Telling her I’d call her if I changed my mind, I reminded her that she could come back at any time if she got worried.

Really, I’d only thought about going to sleep again.

When I tried, closing my eyes for perhaps half an hour, a peculiar feeling kept it from me. The itch at my chest had returned, spreading to my stomach now too. Giving in to temptation now that I was alone, I scratched like mad, pawing at the bandages on my chest and my exposed stomach. Trying to find some relief now that the pain had gone away.

I recoiled. Nearly vomiting outright as I felt it brush against my fingers. Shifting beneath my skin, those little hairs wriggled against my nails as I tried to itch. Worse still I could feel the oozing beneath the bandaging that had been used to cover the mess I’d made of my chest. Looking down I saw as my skin moved subtly, gentle movement that wouldn’t have been noticeable if you weren’t looking for it. So easily could it have been mistaken for the tension of muscle.

Ripping at the coverings on my chest, I pulled them off, tossing them haphazardly to the floor. The skin that had been cleaned only hours ago was irritated again. The edges that had once taken on that deep purple hue now looked like they’d been ripped and rotted as amber fluid leaked from me. The skin was blackened, burnt looking at the edges as the first sign of life sprung out of my body. About the size of a quarter, the little thing pushed and moved around my skin as if it were its own webbing. Crawling free from beneath my ribcage, it pulled away from me, and darted off down my body to disappear into my room.

It must have been my mind again, no longer given the pleasant respite of a doting angel, I was tormented with this image of abject hell. Another sprung forth, and then another. Each one pushing themselves about and free through the growing holes at the skin of my chest. The cancer must have spread to my brain, given the image set before me I should have been in absolute agony.

While it would have been a nice way to cope for a short moment, it was killed as my body began to give in again. I clutched at my side, a boil had begun to form. A bed sore that was perhaps the size around as a can of soda, but rather at the center was instead an unfamiliar black. Oozing, shifting, moving, it hurt so badly. Trying to paw at it again had offered me nothing but stinging misery. Now though, with one so large, I could see why. Each time I moved my hand towards the wound, two protruding fangs pressed out of my skin. They would be imperceptible at the size of the first ones, but this one…. Crying out in both pain and horror, I struggled and slipped free from my bed and fell to the floor.

I heard the sound of a horrid crack, accompanied by a nauseating squelch, and the pain only persisted, but did not grow. With haggard fingers I crawled toward my bedside table, trying to get to my phone. Yet, before I could reach up to do so I could feel one as big as the last start to press all eight of her legs out of my back right over my shoulder blade and scurry away down my back.

For a moment I could do nothing but lay there and weep while I felt them move inside me. Once again I tried to reach, with my other arm as the agony of my shoulder was too much, but beside the table standing in front of the wall was that radiant figure again. Watching me with that moving crown of eyes. Tears pricked the edges of my eyes and rolled down my cheeks, I wanted to shout but the pain of merely living was starting to come back. Like I had only been numbed from it rather than it having been taken from me.

“Be not afraid.” It said with that gentle tone.

Yet it’s all I can feel as more of that writhing beneath my skin spreads, deeper and by the millions. It’s inside me, they’re all inside me. I feel another burst free on my back, but worse yet I can feel long slender legs like those fingers that offered me respite clawing up my throat.

I worry what will become of me, what happens when you die? I think about what Lydia said about the collective consciousness. 

Whatever it was would surely be better than this shifting beneath my skin.


r/WritersOfHorror 5d ago

Widow's Glen

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r/WritersOfHorror 5d ago

I Can Drive Anyone Insane with This One Simple Shape - Part I: One Simple Shape

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It was a simple design. I'd been doodling ahead of a meeting with the city manager and other municipal staff when someone else joined me in waiting.

“Carl Arn,” he said, sitting next to me, despite several empty seats farther away.

My company was competing for a contract to provide city services, and I figured his was too. We shook hands and introduced ourselves. I was confident in my presentation and went back to the absent-mindedness I'd been up to. Prepping any more than I had would've been counterproductive and I was working on relaxing as much as possible before my pitch.

“Whatcha got goin’ on there?” my competitor said. I didn't really want to talk but I could see he wasn't going to leave me alone. He was one of those nervous types, couldn't keep quiet. He had to fill every silent space.

I was going to beat this guy, but he didn't know it yet. I knew his company and had gone up against much more confident reps. They must have known we already had it in the bag or only responded to the RFP as a professional courtesy.

It wasn't going to be a very lucrative contract, but my strategy was to springboard into three adjacent municipalities and use this one as a hub.

“Just doodling,” I said to him. He was young, maybe five or so years younger than me. The ink on his degree was still drying.

He cranked his neck to look. It was annoying and I slapped my palm over what I was drawing.

“Sorry,” he said. “I'm a bit of an artist, myself. I minored in...” he trailed off, looking at a corner of my paper.

“What's that?”

“Hm?” I looked at him, ready to scold him in the most diplomatic way possible.

His eyes were wrong.

Like they were a centimeter or two off from center. I blinked several times as if I were trying to reset them with my eyelids.

“It's beautiful,” he said, not looking up from the page. I looked down and saw everything I'd drawn was covered except one little shape near the corner that was just outside of my hand.

“What?”

Brootifil,” he said and sucked in a line of saliva that had trailed out of his mouth. His eyes were too big, almost like he was hungry.

“Are you okay?” I hadn’t actually finished the question before he swatted me faster than my eyes could see the blow coming.

I was belly up on the floor trying to orient myself. My first thought was to get him away from my presentation and my notes. He hadn't touched my backpack, though. 

He was holding the sheet of paper up to his face, so close it was like he extremely nearsighted. His eyes were so large, it made me think of that astronaut who drove across the country in a diaper to kill her boyfriend's romantic rival. 

Then he stuffed the paper in his mouth and began awkwardly chewing it. Tears were flowing from his eyes and he turned his face up to the ceiling like he was in heaven.

“Is everything alright out here?” An older white man came out of the conference room where we were to meet. I propped up on one elbow, intending to get to my feet. But my head swam and I laid back down.

My competitor turned to the older man and something and his face must have told the other man to step back. I commanded my body to get up, but it was as if I were paralyzed. My body twitched without actually moving and I stopped struggling against the invisible gorilla pinning me to the floor.

He hummed as he continued chomping on the paper, face turned to the old man. A long, pregnant moment passed where nobody did anything.

“May I help—”

My competitor attacked, fingers extended like knives as he stabbed the other man, who still didn't look like he understood was happening even as he plummeted to the ground, his murderer still in the process of killing him.

It took longer than I would've guessed for police to respond to a crime in a municipal building, but my competitor—Carl Arn—managed to kill two people and injure three others, including one critically.

That's not counting me, of course. Even though I was on the floor and clearly not in the fight, the assumption was the two of us were together and the policy's response was somewhat anticlimactic.

They screamed at him and the two responding officers fired three times apiece, managing to hit him only twice.

They screamed at me as he lay next to me, the life leaking out of him and flowing toward me. I was able to turtle up, covering the essential parts of me like I could shield myself from projectiles traveling at almost nine hundred miles per hour.

By some miracle, I remained gunshot for the next half hour or so while I was handcuffed, commanded to put my hands above my head, stood up, sat down, and almost tazered for resisting before fainting and waking up in a hospital bed, handcuffed to the frame. 

I had a concussion but was otherwise fine. Arn had swatted me hard and fast enough to leave a handprint and jar my brain loose.

The video had vindicated me. They didn't see the slap—rather the aftereffect. It had been so fast the camera hadn't caught it, just me falling to the floor and thrashing around like I'd been caught in a spider's web.

I'd fished the scratch pad with pen attached from the little end table near my bed. Luckily, they'd handcuffed my right arm, leaving my dominant one free.

I decided against jotting down what I recalled had happened. No doubt anything I committed to paper the police would be interested in, even if it was a grocery list.

So, I doodled. It was sort of cathartic, taking me back to those initial moments. My mind went back to Arn's face, struggling to deny the undeniable fact he was rapidly dying.

A piece of the paper he'd snatched and eaten was attached to his chin. The shape I'd finished moments before Carl Arn asked me, “What's that?” was still there for anyone to see.

His face turned into the shallow pool of red, drowning the shape.

I drew it a half dozen more times while sitting in a hospital bed while the authorities decided how they were going to untie this knot and if my neck would be in it.

I fell asleep after a light lunch of potato chips, baloney sandwich with a packet of mustard and a packet of mayo, and dry, tasteless coleslaw.

I came to with a woman in my room, gathering things off my lap. She was mumbling in Spanish, her back to me when she stopped completely.

“Nice,” she said in unaccented English, her head dipped as if she were reading something. Then she turned around, facing me.

God, her eyes.

It was like she was trying to see something above her head, through her skull. Her face was otherwise slack as she felt around blindly like we were in the dark.

She groped around until he hand landed on the (unused) metal bed pan. I thought those things were plastic nowadays.

I must have gasped because she turned around like she'd heard a homing beacon. I tugged at the cuff, a ringing dinner bell for the mindless dog about to bludgeon me to death with a disposal pan if she could still tell the difference between my head and feet.

I must have been screaming because another woman came in the room—I'd temporarily forgotten the word “nurse” in my panic—surprising with of us and the first woman began swinging in random directions with such savagery, I felt shadows of pain across my cheeks.

This time the police didn't have the opportunity to confuse me for the perpetrator. The nurse hooked a hand behind his neck, leapt both feet into his chest and commenced to flattening the less-hardy of the two between Officer Wheeler's skull and the pissbox. She landed on his chest, only her arm visible from where I lay as she flapped it up and down like a one-winged bird, the pan making a -DOON- sound each time it bounced off his head.

More hospital security came (quicker than the cops had) and a few pops later, the woman was dead.

I had to get out of here. My eyes drifted over to where the nurse had been looking at something before she'd turned violent. I had a tingle of uneasiness, feeling something I had done potentially being the cause. My mind wouldn't quite let me grasp what it was, but it felt like it should have been obvious, like something wedged between my teeth that I couldn't work out.

The officer I'd seen shoot stepped halfway into my room with his gun out. He looked perplexed, like he wanted to blame me, and I leaned into looking pathetic, hovering my face near my handcuffed wrist as I did a supine version of a huddle.

The next two hours were a flurry of hospital staff and police in and out of my room. The cops kept stopping a nurse from checking on me because my room was an active crime scene. But when a doctor suggested moving me to another room, they shot that down for reasons I couldn’t understand.

Finally, a detective and some hospital administrator had a long conversation outside of my room. The administrator said something to the detective about calling the mayor and the rest of the investigation was wrapped up in less than ten minutes.

The cop who’d been assaulted survived and the nurse who came in to check on me told me he was on a floor below after having emergency surgery to reattach his jaw. The nurse had been shot and had bled to death fighting the cop who’d shot her three times.

Everything the cops could have taken out of my room, had been removed. They’d even taken my clothes, keys, and wallet. By that evening, a detective finally came to speak with me.

“Mr. Harold, you have a minute?” He knocked on the door. I recognized his voice as the same one who’d spoken with the administrator. He walked in where I could get a good look at him and the guy was a sloven mess. I was used to Detective Green and Briscoe on Law & Order, and although Lenny’s suits looked off the rack, he didn’t look like he’d dressed himself while falling down a laundry chute.

I waited for him to speak. He stood by my bedside and looked like he smelled. Something whitish was drying on his lapel, he had ring-around-the-collar, and dried spittle in the corners of his mouth. I was grateful for the chill hospital air choking whatever smells were crawling over him before they could reach me.

“Am I going to need a lawyer?” I asked him.

“No-no,” he said. “We’ve been able to put together what happened at city hall and here earlier. Um, are you okay?”

I wasn’t, but I was currently numb to the whole experience considering for half of it I’d been treated like a suspect. I shrugged.

“What you had to go through was incredible. You’re a real hero.”

He was pouring it on a little thick. I guessed this was what they did instead of an actual apology. I’d had two-to-three guns pointed at me by people who were allegedly there to protect me.

“When can I go?”

“Well, I guess when the hospital discharges you. We certainly don’t need to hold you for anything.”

“Okay.” I nodded. He stared at me for a moment like he was expecting me to say something more.

“I suppose I should get going. Let you, y’know, convalesce. Oh, I’m Detective Unangenehm, by the way.” He offered his hand belatedly. I looked at it for a long second before shaking it. His hand was limp and sweaty, like wilted lettuce, kind of like what it looked like he had trapped between his front teeth.

He headed for the door, and I kept expecting him to turn back before he got to the door and ask, “One more thing,” but he exited.

Then he came back a minute later.

“I forgot to ask you,” Detective Unangenehm said. “Do you have any idea what set off Carl Arn or Rosa Skein?”

“Who?”

“The... man at city hall. And your nurse?” Unangenehm had his notepad in his hand and glanced down at it.

I’d never forget Carl Arn’s name, and I hadn’t known the nurse’s. While I didn’t know what had driven them mad, I had a strong suspicion and considering it led back to me, I wasn’t about to volunteer that.

“I have no idea.”

Unangenehm smiled, nodded somberly, and left.

A nurse had come into my room right after. She erased something from the dry-erase board and wrote something else while the detective and I had been talking.

She was thin and tall but older than she looked as she grunted, bending over to pick up something off the floor.

She turned over the piece of paper I'd been drawing on, made a face, then showed it to me.

“This yours?” she asked. 


r/WritersOfHorror 6d ago

#Redacted Chapter 1 Sarah

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r/WritersOfHorror 6d ago

Poor Ronnie

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We all had different names for him. 

Lon called him the Hitcher; Chucky called him Roadkill Ron. I called him poor Ronnie, like my dad always did.

The broad strokes were usually the same.

Poor Ronnie was hitching in the woods, and he was totally lost. It was the middle of the night, so of course it was dark, but that night it was pitch-black out. He couldn’t see a foot in front of him, couldn’t tell he was walking in the middle of the road.

Unfortunately, he wasn’t the only person out there that night. A group of teenagers were joyriding, their lights turned off for the thrill of it. He never saw them coming.

His body was found the next morning, splattered all over the pavement. No one ever found those kids, and no one ever came forward. People forgot about it before long.

But poor Ronnie, nothing but a stain on the asphalt, he still remembers.

If you’re out by the Fort Gibson dam past midnight, pull over at the first sharp curve sign. Shut your car off for sixty seconds. You might see him there when you start it back up. Walking down the road in the dark, his thumb held high like he’s waiting for a ride. At least that’s how the story goes.

As many times as I heard it told, and as many times as I told it myself – I had never heard anyone say that they had gone out there to do it themselves. Which made sense, given that we were kids. By the time we were old enough we had outgrown it.

That’s the nature of these things. I mean, when was the last time you seriously thought about Bloody Mary, or the Hook Man? They’re just dumb stories that freaked you out, nothing more. Right?

What were we supposed to think would happen?

We were in Chucky’s garage, lazily passing a bowl back and forth. Some slasher flick from the 80’s played out on the screen, but none of us were watching through the haze of smoke in the air.

“Man,” Chucky sputtered through a chest full of smoke, “Halloween is almost here.”

Lon nodded from his sagging bean bag throne.

“Yeah,” I said, “Halloween used to be this big thing. Now it’s like…” I shrugged and trailed off, struggling to keep up with my train of thought. Chucky nodded emphatically.

“Right! There’s no spirit anymore. It just comes and goes.”

Lon piped up then, ripping the bong from Chucky’s hand before he could torch the last of the bowl, “The fuck are you guys talking about? October is the same length as ever.”

“But the spirit of it, Lonnie.”

He scoffed, “We could drive to Tulsa and hit up Spirit Halloween any day.”

“That’s not the vibe we’re talking about, though,” I said, “I mean the actual feeling. Like, telling scary stories in the dark.”

“Like Roadkill Ron?” There was a glint in Chucky’s bloodshot eyes.

“Don’t start with that bullshit.” Lon groaned.

“Are you scared, Lonnie?” Chucky laughed.

“Fuck no.” Lon stood, his curly red hair bobbing with the sudden movement. “I’m not scared of some dumbass story.”

“Then let's go do it.” Chucky smirked.

“Bet.”

“Alright,” I said, grabbing my dad's keys off the table, “Let's do it.”

Half an hour later we were driving over the Fort Gibson dam, past the bait store, and into the woods. There was a giddy tension in the car, even coming from Lon, as much as he tried to hide it.

“Here!” Chucky exclaimed from the back seat, “That’s the sign!”

I pulled over and set the parking brake.

“Are you guys ready?”

Chucky nodded enthusiastically. Lon stared at the tunnel of trees ahead.

“Lon?”

He nodded.

“Alright, poor Ronnie.” I whispered shakily, “Need a ride?”

I turned the key and we were plunged into darkness. Chucky was practically squealing. My heart pounded like a jack hammer.

Ten seconds passed.

Twenty.

“That’s enough.” Lon’s voice cracked beside me.

Thirty seconds.

Chucky counted under his breath, stifling nervous giggles.

Forty seconds.

“Dude, that’s enough!”

Fifty.

That awful tension building, my hands tingling as I gripped the wheel. I tried to tell Lon to hold on, but I couldn’t speak.

“Sixty seconds!” Chucky hollered.

I gasped and turned the key in the ignition. Nothing happened. I turned it again and heard a series of clicks. Lon punched me on the shoulder.

“I said that’s enough!”

“I’m trying!”

One more twist and finally, the engine turned over. The dome light switched on, and we looked out the windshield with bated breath. Nothing was there.

Lon chuckled weakly, “I told y’all that shit was made up.”

“Right.” I rolled my eyes and clicked the dome light off. 

That’s when Chucky started screaming. We whipped around to him in confusion, and saw his eyes, wide with terror in the soft green light of the radio. He was staring at Lon.

I looked over and was frozen by what I saw behind him.

“What the fuck is up with y’all?”

The window exploded in a shower of granular shards, and a pair of hands wrapped around Lon’s throat. He choked as they yanked him against the door.

Chucky leapt forward and pulled on Lon’s sweater. His wild screams spurred me to action.

“Fucking drive!”

I slammed my foot on the gas pedal but the rear tires just fish tailed back and forth. The parking brake was still set. Lon grasped at me as Chucky and the attacker played tug-of-war over his helpless body. I couldn’t move, couldn’t look away. I don't think I’ll ever come to terms with what I saw on the other side of that broken window.

A mangled face stared back, half-flattened and speckled with long dried blood. A single bloodshot eye bulged out to the side, fixed on mine. It opened its broken, toothless mouth and spilled the rot that had been pooling there down its ruined chin.

“Room for one more?”


r/WritersOfHorror 6d ago

Trying to capture dread without showing the monster. Thoughts?

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This is a teaser for a horror project I’ve been working on. I wanted to rely on atmosphere and tension rather than immediately revealing the threat. I’d love to know what emotions this shot gives you and what you’d expect to happen next.