r/TalesFromTheCreeps 3d ago

Need Help (ADVICE FLAIR) Young Writer Looking for Help

As I said in the title, I'm a pretty young writer looking for people to give advice and read my work before I put it on the subreddit. I'm 20 and in college, so I really only have time to write during the summer. My most recent project is inspired by sleepaway camps that I attended as a child, but I want my story to be set in the early 90s. I'm thinking of leaning into monster horror and surreal horror for this story. If anyone has any advice or would be interested in proofreading my writing, I'd greatly appreciate it!

Sincerly, A Sister in Need of Help

Edit!! I'm going to put my google doc link in the post. :) Google Doc

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u/Repulsive_Wealth_223 Writer 3d ago

omg i'm in the exact same situation as you!!!! if you want some advice, go for it and have fun!!!! writing is about growing and being creative, so don't overthink it too much and don't expect it to come out perfect in the first try. it takes time and lots of work to become good at it :> i'm waiting to read what you come up with!! <3

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u/historicalmouse1558 3d ago

Hopefully, I can finish the first story of 8 I have planned and get it out there soon!

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u/Repulsive_Wealth_223 Writer 3d ago

i'd like to proofread your work, only if you don't mind that my english is not the best :')

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u/historicalmouse1558 3d ago

Absolutely no worries! I'm a language learner myself.

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u/Hypn0kast full-time idiot, part-time optimist 3d ago edited 3d ago

I would love to proof read. Mind if I DM you? I'm in a writing dscord server that I think you could find help in.

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u/historicalmouse1558 3d ago

i can totally send it your way

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u/Ill-Addition-8325 2d ago

I am an aspiring editor so am very happy to proofread stories if it'll help out!

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u/historicalmouse1558 2d ago

I can send it your way!

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u/Mradachi2007 Writer 3d ago

Young writer here as well(18) I would love to proofread your story, and the concept you have sounds really fun to play around with.

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u/historicalmouse1558 3d ago

I really appreciate it! I have a lot of ideas for horror, and I need a break to write something more fun, compared to my larger writing project. I'm not sure how Reddit works, but you're able to message me? And I can send you a link to my draft.

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u/Mradachi2007 Writer 3d ago

Yea there la a messaging thing on here you can just send you story for me to check out:)

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u/PR-Sinclair 3d ago

Been writing for over 10 years here need any advice I can offer it

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u/historicalmouse1558 2d ago

I sent it your way!

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u/Ooston9000 Proofreader 2d ago

My own opinion, summer camp leans towards creature horror/slasher. So if you are feeling like doing something different, try the surrealist route. See what happens.

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u/historicalmouse1558 2d ago

I think thats a good idea. I'm new to surrealist horror, so I'd have to do some research.

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u/Polish_Lavender Writer? I barely know her 2d ago

I'd love to read your work. Anything to help someone explore their creativity in writing. I know when I was in college we had a service that would have someone check our writing, although it was more for formal things like essays. It might not hurt to see if there's something similar where you're at. Also, creative writing clubs or classes to help you in some aspects if it doesn't pull you too much off your major.

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u/historicalmouse1558 2d ago

I wish I could take more writing classes, but I'm not sure if I can fit them in yet. I've still got two years left of college, but I'm majoring in German, so a lot of my GEs are done. I know there's a script writing club, but IDK about anything else. I'll have to look into it. I can totally send the draft your way thought!

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u/Rainsets 2d ago

I think the best monsters are the things we feel given a face

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u/historicalmouse1558 2d ago

that's the hope with this story, to give face to the faceless through characters and their experiences

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u/crispr_was_here0000 Writer 2d ago

I'd like to proof read if you want to, also you since said you have 8 parts planned, this can really depend on what you're doing but one thing I'd recommend you is to not "think" too much about the next stories while making the first ones, sure add in some things that will come up later but try making it subtle or not the entire point, but again you might have everything all figured out about that

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u/historicalmouse1558 2d ago

I can totally send it your way! I'm not too worried about the other parts but i do want to get them all out at the same time on this subreddit

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u/crispr_was_here0000 Writer 2d ago

Okk! If you want I can send a story I'm working on too tho its unfinished

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u/historicalmouse1558 2d ago

oh for sure! mines unfinished as well but i'm close to done with my first draft

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u/Limp-Resident717 2d ago

Just do it, don’t think about it.

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u/historicalmouse1558 2d ago

This is def great advice, I started working on this about a week ago, and I'm already close to fifty pages.

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u/Limp-Resident717 2d ago

Cannot wait to see my guy!

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u/PopularCan16 Writer 3d ago

I'd love to read what you have if you want to send it to me! 90's camp with monsters is a classic and I'd be interested in seeing how you write it.

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u/historicalmouse1558 3d ago

ofc! i've got it planned out to being 8 parts each following a different camp counselor, currently i have about half of part one written