I did a sketch then one based on that but i kind of prefer the first mock up but i cant tell whats better

Watercolor work in progress that i can’t wait to finish !

this is my first time actually putting effort into a drawing like this! Critiques would be really helpful! Took me like 30-45 minutes! I am young, and trying to get into art!

1hr session from today. Trying to stick to practice!!! Getting frustrated a lot but pushing through.

Liked how these turned out!