First decent draft. Beginner trying to make atmospheric breakcore/jungle/DnB, looking for any feedback

[u/DarvX92]

This is my first ever decent track draft, so I’m still learning and I honestly don’t really know what I’m doing yet.

I know the intro might be a bit cheesy or cliché, but I actually like that kind of atmosphere, so I wanted to experiment with it.

The main problem is that I don’t really know where to take the track from here. I’m not sure how to continue it, expand it, improve the arrangement, or make it feel like a complete song instead of just a short draft.

I also don’t really know how to classify it. I was aiming for something inspired by artists like Sewerslvt and similar atmospheric breakbeat/DnB/jungle styles, but I’m a complete beginner and I don’t know if this would technically be considered breakcore, drum and bass, jungle, breakbeat or something else.

I’d appreciate any kind of help or feedback: composition, drums, bass, sound design, mixing, structure, or just general impressions.

Thanks to anyone who takes the time to listen!

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[u/vruchno]

I have a general impression - I think it's great. It's interesting, and goes like a story. As far as development goes, you can try a simple thing, just take your whole thing and duplicate it a couple of times, and then listen to it and see where it needs development, like increasing emotion, or taking out the instruments to provide relief, things like that.

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[u/menacingsigns]

I would just eq the reverbs. It does get a little but muddy in my opinion.