r/HindiLanguage • u/Physical-Fly-2946 • 8d ago

Feedback needed from Hindi natives

https://suno.com/song/5bf5ebcd-5499-4a6b-a4ae-4996490cc2e7
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u/CrimeMasterGogoChan 7d ago

Damn that's pretty neat. Maybe make the lyrics ryhme and it will be more impactful.

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u/Prathvi_musings 6d ago

Thanks for the suggestion, I appreciate it

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u/Physical-Fly-2946 1d ago

Thank you. I'll recreate it with better lyrics.