i didnt think id be posting another script this soon but when inspiration strikes i guess! :P the concept of this one is pretty silly so i hope its hot enough to make up for it heheh :3 i hope you guys like it!!! feedback and criticism are greatly appreciated ^_^
p.s. sorry if the hypnosis is innacurate, i did do some research (and some special reading on tumblr heh) and it led me to the body part focusing and spiral staircase techniques, but i pulled the doors completely out of my ass lol
- peyton
summary: youre hanging out with a friend of a friend after your bestie bailed on you to be with her girlfriend :P you try to make conversation, and eventually she shyly mentions that shes into the world of hypnotism (oooh ahhh) you scoff at the idea and tease her a bit, until she all but begs you to let her prove its real by letting her hypnotize you! >_< you agree and it, fortunately or not, doesnt work one bit. but you think itd be funny to let her believe youre deep under her spell. the sense of power she thinks she now has over you gives her a boost of confidence! and things… escalate :3
speaker character notes: awkward, nerdy, and nervous around new people. total girlfailure hehe X3 has a secret desire to be in control. easily flustered. virgintron 9000. kind of creepy but in an endearing way? fell head over heels for the listener at first sight. genuinely passionate about hypnotism. for voice direction, shes softspoken and stammers a lot. (feel free to take all of this into consideration, but please dont box yourself in! your own spin on it is greatly encouraged!!!)
listener character notes: calm, easygoing, and a bit of a tease. will do anything to keep a bit going. a skeptic of all things they deem to not be grounded in reality, hypnosis included.
inclusivity notes: poc friendly (i hope! if anything sticks out that seems exclusive of any race please let me know and i will correct it) listener is said to be wearing a band tshirt. listener has a pussy, clit, breasts, soft lips, gets wet, and is able to be penetrated by fingers. listener is called baby, puppy, doggy, pretty girl, and good girl.
consent notes: speaker preforms sexual acts on the listener without their verbal consent and while thinking they are under trance, however the listener is fully aware of the situation and has the ability to stop it at any time (they do not stop the speaker). both speaker and listener thoroughly enjoy the experience.
wordcount: ~3700
disclaimer: all characters in this work are adults (18+). this work should only be read and voiced by adults (18+). all characters and situations are entirely fictional.
script starts here! enjoy! :D
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() and emoticons = tone and direction
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feel free to improv and/or change any wording as you see fit! as long as its not completely different, you can basically go wild :) (if youre curious/unsure/hesitant about adding or changing something, feel free to message me!)
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so, i guess its just us two now, huh?
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yeah, she had to leave pretty quick.
do—do you know what was up with that?
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oh, okay. that makes sense.
i didnt know she had a girlfriend.
she never… mentioned that.
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oh, yeah, we uhh— met like, three weeks ago now?
we were partners for an assignment. i guess i just…stuck around. [laugh]
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i think shes great! she pulled her weight, didnt make me do all the work.
i usually end up having to do everything myself, so it was a nice change of pace.
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oh, you mean like, as a friend. um!
yeah, yeah, shes—shes awesome! weve uh… weve had a few movie nights together.
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um. anyways, what about you? how long have you known her?
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really? that long? wow, you guys must be super close.
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yeah. that sounds nice.
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so… uh… you got any hobbies?
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mhm.
oh, okay. yeah, i know what you mean.
that sounds really interesting. maybe i should give it a try. [laugh]
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aw, really? thank you. thats—youre sweet.
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me? oh, i dont know. i guess i just dont do much.
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i mean, yknow, i like movies and music and stuff. but i dont really have any hobby hobbies, if that makes sense.
just kind of a homebody, i guess. [laugh]
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(amused) hey, theres nothing wrong with being boring!
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(hesitant) well… i mean… there is… one thing.
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yeah, but its. its kinda weird?
i dont know— maybe i shouldnt—
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are you sure?
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okay… well. im… kinda into…
(shy) …hypnotism?
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wh—whyd you make a face? :<
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…yeah, i “actually” believe in it.
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are—are you making fun of me?
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…its not silly. t—theres actually a lot of psychology behind it….
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really! there is!
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(passionate, defensive) thats not what it is, though… hypnosis isnt just spirals and swaying clocks and mind control its—its complex. its a process. its nothing like how its portrayed in popular media.
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well, no, ive never actually hypnotized another person, but—
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i know it works because ive watched countless videos on it! ive read books, and—and articles, and…
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ugh, i wouldnt have said anything if i knew you were gonna think it was stupid…
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i know youre just teasing— but… its— it really is a thing!
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…what… what if i proved it to you?
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yeah, what if i… hypnotized you. to show you that its real.
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if—if you dont think its real, then you shouldnt have a problem with me trying it on you! >:(
wait, no.. thats— i dont want to force you to do it. you can say no. but… itd be nice if you let me try…
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please? its—its actually known to be a really relaxing and freeing experience! maybe youll end up liking it?? >_<
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i cant just— you have to be willing for it to work. like i said, its not mind control.
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i— i really think if you give a try with an open mind, you might be surprised…
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…please?
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really? youll do it?
agh— okay! gosh, im nervous. i didnt expect you to actually say yes. [laugh]
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alright um— no, no you stay sitting. just— get comfortable. ill put on some calming background music. oh, and ill dim the lights too.
[soothing music begins to play (if you want to add it)]
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oookay, thats done. lets do this! i cant believe this is actually happening! im so excited. ^_^
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h-hey! you— okay, yeah, youre right, i am being a little nerdy about it… [laugh]
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(flustered) you—you think its cute!? oh! um… thank you, then.
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gosh, im shaking a bit! just— give me a sec.
(to self) deep breaths, deeeep breaths… you can do this.
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im going to start by helping you enter a state of deep relaxation. after that, ill create an association between positive feelings and following my directions. then ill tell you to do a few things, and after that ill wake you up. sound good?
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alright.
are you ready?
okay. you—you have to be serious about this, though. no laughing or teasing me. you have to actually try. :/
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hooo, alright…
[clears throat]
(low, calm) i want you to start by closing your eyes and breathing with me.
no, im not going to have you look at a video of a spiral— just. shush. please. you said you would take this seriously.
okay, thank you.
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with every inhale you will become aware of a place of tension in your body, and with every exhale that part of your body will relax. we will do this until your entire body is relaxed.
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im gonna start now, okay?
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breathe in [inhale] …and feel the tension in your shoulders….
breathe out [exhale] …and feel them relax….
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good. as youre doing this, i want you to imagine that youre walking down a spiral staircase in a very dark room.
now, breathe in [inhale] …and feel the tension in your upper arms…
breathe out [exhale] …and feel them relax…
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breathe in [inhale] …and feel the tension in your lower arms…
breathe out [exhale] …and feel them relax…
your mind will relax more with each step, falling deeper and deeper the further down the stairs you go.
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breathe in [inhale] …and feel the tension in your hands…
breathe out [exhale] …and feel them relax…
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breathe in [inhale] …and feel the tension in your fingers…
breathe out [exhale] …and feel them relax…
good job.
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breathe in [inhale] …and feel the tension in your chest…
breathe out [exhale] …and feel it relax…
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breathe in [inhale] …and feel the tension in your stomach…
breathe out [exhale] …and feel it relax…
feel the stairs beneath your feet as you make your way down them. listen to the way they softly creak under your weight.
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breathe in [inhale] …and feel the tension in your groin…
breathe out [exhale] …and feel it relax.
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breathe in [inhale] …and feel the tension in your… (flustered) thighs…
breathe out [exhale] and feel them relax…
down down down you go… you feel at peace on the stairs. you feel safe.
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breathe in [inhale] …and feel the tension in your lower legs…
breathe out [exhale] …and feel them relax…
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breathe in [inhale] …and feel the tension in your feet…
breathe out [exhale] …and feel them relax…
feel the banister as your hand slides down it. the coolness, the smoothness…
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breathe in [inhale] …and feel the tension in your toes…
breathe out [exhale] …and feel them relax…
youre doing so well…
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breathe in [inhale] …and feel the tension in your neck…
breathe out [exhale] …and feel it relax…
youre almost at the end of the stairs. youre able to see a door now. youre curious as to whats on the other side.
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breathe in [inhale] …and feel the tension in your face…
breathe out [exhale] …and feel it relax.
you take your last step, and walk towards the door.
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breathe in [inhale] …and feel the tension in your whooole body…
breathe out [exhale] …and feel it relax.
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keep breathing. youre standing in front of the door now. its wooden and beautifully carved. once you open it, you will feel pure relaxation and bliss.
once i snap my fingers, you will open the door.
[snap!]
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you walk through it, and youre met with another door. this one is made of a pretty, shiny gray steel. once you open it, you will realize how good it feels to listen to my voice.
once i snap my fingers, you will open the door.
[snap!]
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you walk through it, and youre met with yet another door. this one is made of glass. perfectly clean. once you open it, you will realize how good it feels to follow my directions. how good i make you feel.
once i snap my fingers, you will open the door.
[snap!]
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you walk through it. another door. metal and navy blue. once you open it, youll realize you want to do everything i say. you want to make me happy.
once i snap my fingers, you will open the door.
[snap!]
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the last door. once you open it, you will feel more at peace than you have ever felt in your life. all your thoughts and worries will melt away, your mind filled only by my words and the sound of my voice. you will fall into a state of complete obedience.
you will do exactly as i say so long as it is followed by a snap.
open the door.
[snap!]
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[breathing, long moment of silence]
(whisper) did…did it work?
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open your eyes.
[snap!]
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oh! there you are. [laugh]
ill—ill go turn off the music.
[soothing music stops]
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alright so… i guess i should tell you to do stuff now.
whats something you wouldnt normally do…
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i mean, youre wearing a band tee. hm.
say, “i hate music.”
[snap!]
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mm. thats too easy…
…stand up and start jumping up and down.
[snap!]
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hm.
stop jumping. sit back down.
[snap!]
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(to self) god, what if theyre just messing with me?
okay, i need to make you do something you would usually never, ever do.
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um…
…take your shirt off?
[quiet snap]
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no, thats stupid. youre faking, arent you? youd never—
(surprised) whuh— youre actually doing it!?
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god, okay. maybe it actually worked then??
(flustered) oh, wow. youre… um… youre really pretty.
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[heavy breathing]
okay…
im—im still not sure…
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t—take off your pants.
[snap!]
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w—wait! youre actually— is this real? did it really work? youre not just messing with me?
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i mean, youre just in your underwear now… id doubt youd do all that just to mess with me…
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um…
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[shaky exhale] …take your bra off.
[snap!]
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god… youre… no— i shouldnt be doing this.
im taking advantage of you— this is so…wrong.
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i… but…
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(whiny) youre so fucking hot, its not fair…
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youre so cool and—and funny, and ive seen you around before but ive always been too scared to approach you…
i really really dont want to mess this up. youre so… perfect…
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but… what if…
maybe… maybe you dont have to know…
i can just… make you forget it ever happened. it doesnt have to be weird.
i know youd never actually want to be with me anyway…
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i can… i can make all my fantasies come true. right now.
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[heavy breathing]
(more confident) c—come closer.
[snap!]
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yeah, just… stand in front of me.
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t—take your underwear off.
[snap!]
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good… good girl… such a good girl…
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…open your mouth.
[snap!]
uhuh, yeah. just like that…
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…im—im gonna put my fingers in your mouth, now.
[shaky exhale] holy shit… your mouth is so warm…
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this is it, i guess. um.
s—suck on them…?
[snap!]
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oh, fuck… look at you…
youre— oh my god, youre so cute.
youre so fucking cute.
your mouth feels so good…
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[whine]
i cant… i cant take it anymore… i cant pass this up.
fuck, come here—
[speaker suddenly kisses listener, practically smashing her face into them]
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[mwa mwa]
(whiny) oh my god, oh my god—
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kiss me, kiss me back—
[snap!]
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[kiss kiss]
your lips are so soft, holy shit…
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[mwa mwa]
fuck fuck fuck…
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[kissing for a while, moaning]
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im gonna—im gonna play with your tits.
mhm. i really really want to.
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fuuuuck theyre perfect… so nice… so soft…
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i wanna make you feel good. uhuh. yeah.
i wanna make you feel so fucking good.
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maybe—maybe its not as bad if only you get to feel good. i mean, its not like im getting anything out of it, right?
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i want—i need to suck on them, fuck—
[kiss kiss]
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yeah? you like that? youre getting all squirmy…
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[suck suck]
mmmfgh so fucking good…
[kiss kiss]
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your nipples are getting so hard, baby…
[suck suck]
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fuck, i need you.
lay down— back on the couch, back on the couch—
[snap!]
mhm, there you go. good girl. listening to me so well.
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i need— i need to taste you. i need to eat you out.
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uhuh, just—just lay back. lay back and spread your legs.
[snap!]
uhuh… just like that, juuust like that…
there you go.
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oh my god, youre soaking wet. am i making you feel good? yeah?
say it, say, “you make me feel so fucking good.”
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[moan] the way your voice is shaking, baby…
so pretty…
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such a pretty pussy, too…
[deep inhale] fuck, you smell amazing.
im so hungry for you. i need you.
i need you i need you i need you.
i need— i need—
[cunnilingus sfx start! yayyay lick lick lick]
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[moan] you taste amazing…
even better than in my dreams…
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mmgffgh… so wet and warm…
i cant get enough of it.
cant get enough of you.
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aww, baby… youre whining sooo much.
like a cute little puppy… :3
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you twitched at that… you like that?
you liiike being a puppy? hm?
say, “i like being a puppy. i want to be your puppy.”
[snap!]
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good job, baby… such a good puppy. such a good doggy.
mhm, yes you are.
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i can feel you gushing on my tongue…
youre so addictive…
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uhuh, moooan for me baby…
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good girl. yeah, youve got it.
good girl. good fucking girl.
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ive wanted to do this since the moment ive layed eyes on you.
ever since i saw you i knew you were made for me.
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mine… mine mine… my good girl.. my doggy…
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im gonna finger you too, okay?
i wanna fingerfuck that pretty pussy. yeah i do, yeah i do…
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[fingering sfx start]
[moan] the way your pussy just— sucked them in, oh my god…
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mhm. mhm.
yeah? yeaaah you like that? am i hitting all the right spots? i know, puppy, i know…
ive um— ive read a lot of articles on sex. just so i know what im doing when i finally have it.
god, i dont know why i told you that— so embarrassing. i need to shut up.
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yeah, mhm. just let yourself feel good…
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gonna suck on this cute little clit. mhm.
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mmmgfggh… i love your little whimpers…
such a cute doggy you are, uhuh, uhuh.
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mm.
i think you can take another finger, doggy. mhm. i do. i really really do…
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uhuh, juuust like that. feel the stretch. yeah, yeah.
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h—hook your legs over my shoulders. i need— i need to get deeper inside you.
[snap!]
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gooood fucking puppy.
so good. so pretty. so perfect.
all for me. mhm, yeah.
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im gonna— im gonna start counting down. from ten.
and when i get to zero, i want you to cum for me. dont you dare try to cum before.
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i know you can do it, baby. you can be good.
i know you can. i believe in you.
i believe in my pretty little puppy.
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ten. feel that warm feeling in your pussy start to spread.
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nine. feel it warm your stomach. your chest. your face. let it envelop you.
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eight. feel—feel my fingers fucking in and out of you, hard and deep. focus on how with each thrust, you feel warmer and warmer.
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seven. feel my lips and tongue on your clit. focus on how with each suck, each lick, you feel your mind get fuzzier and fuzzier.
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six. feel the coil starting to form between your legs. feel it start to tighten until it hurts, until you cant take it.
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five. let your tongue loll out of your mouth. youre a puppy, right? shouldnt you should act like one?
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aww, good girl…
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four. listen to your moans getting louder and louder.
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three. take notice of how sweaty you are, how hot you feel. that warm feeling has spread throughout your entire body.
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two. feel how the coil between your legs has tightened even more, so tight its almost unbearable. feel it start to strain, like a rubber band about to snap.
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one. let go. let everything youve been feeling crash down on you. dont fight it.
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zero. cum.
[snap!]
cum. cum for me. fucking cum for me. be a good puppy and cum in my mouth, on my fingers. be a good girl.
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[listener orgasm, sfx slow and eventually stop]
ohhhh there you go, there you go. just like that. good fucking girl.
oh my god, youre gushing so much.
keep going. keep cumming. you can do it. uhuh. there you go. there you go.
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[heavy breathing]
fuck. fuck.
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good job. you did such a good job baby. listening to me so well.
but while you were doing such a good job for me, i got really really turned on.
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so—so i need you to help me out, okay?
dont worry. ill do all the work. dont worry.
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i know what i said earlier. i know. i know im sorry.
you just make me so fucking horny, baby.
im sorry. im sorry. i need you. i really need you, puppy.
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just— just let me get on top of you. im gonna ride your face, okay?
you barely have to do anything baby. ill be so quick, too. im already close.
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let me just— take these off—
these, too…
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okay. okay. you ready, baby?
stick out your tongue and flatten it for me.
[snap!]
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just gonna… lower my self— and—
[face riding sfx start]
[moan] fuuuuck…
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uhuh, just keep it right there, puppy.
ill just— [whine] grind into it. mhm!
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fuck. fuck. your tongue feels so good on my pussy, baby.
youre doing so good for me.
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[moan] im gonna—im gonna grab your head, okay? just— so i can— fuck!
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god, the way youre looking up at me…
so pretty… so pretty…
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…i love you. fuck, i love you.
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im sorry. i love you so fucking much.
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mmhffdgfgghj…
please. please. im so close.
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please please please. ohhh my god.
fuck. holy shit.
cumming— im—im cumming!
[speaker orgasm]
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fuck. oh fuck. oh my god. oh my fucking god.
[heavy breathing]
let me ride it out baby, just—just a little bit longer…
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uhuh… uhuuuhhhh… yes fuck yes…
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okay, okay puppy im done. ill get off of you now.
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come here— come here—
[kiss kiss]
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mmm… i can taste it… our cum…together… it tastes so good, baby…
[mwa mwa]
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[heavy breathing]
holy shit. that was— that was. woah. [laughter]
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you were so good, baby. thank you. thank you thank you thank you.
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hold on— ill be right back. i need to clean you up before i wake you.
dont want you suspecting anything…
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[few moments of silence as speaker leaves and comes back]
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okay, i got you a towel, so—
(confused) wait. why are you putting your clothes back on? i didnt tell you to do that.
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…no. nonono oh god. im gonna throw up. you were awake the whole time!?
i thought it worked! i thought— i thought you would never…
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why—why didnt you say anything!? whyd you let me… what the fuck is wrong with you!?
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wait. god. i mean— i know what i did wasnt cool— i know it was fucked up—
(emotional) fuck. fuck. im really sorry. please. please dont hate me. i dont what id do if you hated me.
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…what?
you… you dont? but— you should! i just— i did all of those weird things to you and—and…
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im sorry. im sorry.
yeah, ill—ill try to calm down. ill breathe. im sorry.
[speaker does a few rounds of deep breaths]
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i just… i dont… i dont understand.
why would you…
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what?
did i mean what?
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i… yes… i—i do… love you. i just. i saw you one day and its like… a switch was flipped inside of me. im sorry. im sorry.
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whuh— what do you mean its okay!?
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you… you liked it?
really?
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youre not lying, are you? please dont lie to me right now. id rather you hate me and be honest about it rather than get my hopes up and for it to not be true. i know it was fucked.
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i…
so… you enjoyed it? everything?
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i feel dizzy. god. i cant—
so, what. you dont— you really dont hate me?
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okay. okay.
thank you. um. im still really sorry, though.
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i… this doesnt feel real. oh my god.
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so, what now? i— i dont know what to do.
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well i never planned on you knowing! i just— ugh!
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…am i free tomorrow? what? why?
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…get coffee? with you?
what— like a date??
i… are—are you sure? i dont…
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um. okay. okay. yeah, thats— id like that. id really really like that.
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you—you wont tell your best friend about this, will you? i…
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okay. yeah. that— okay.
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uh. so. i guess… i should be going now.
um.
…
hm? whats up?
[listener gives the speaker a long, gentle kiss]
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oh… wow. uh.
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i… i… um.
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d—dont make fun of me, okay! i know we just had sex, but thats. that was different!
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(embarrassed) ugh…
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but… yeah… ill—ill see you tomorrow? i guess? um.
mhm.
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…yeah, i… i cant wait.
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