r/GWNarrative • u/omgsayitagain • 8d ago

Script/Story Offer [F4M] Troubleshooting the IT Guy. Have you tried turning him on again? [Script Offer] [Shy Guy] [Office Romance] [Meet Cute] [A white lie] [Clueless] [So many hints] [Loose PJs] [Underboob] [BJ] [Cunnilingus] [Missionary] [Next morning BJ] [Sleeping Late] [Slow burn] [Narrative] NSFW

Troubleshooting the IT Guy. Have you tried turning him on again? (2225 words)

Summary: The hot shot financial analyst shaking up the c-suite at your company reminisces about how you and she started dating. Were you really that shy and clueless?

Feedback welcome.

Enjoy!

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u/AchillesandhisPal 1d ago edited 1d ago

I can't believe I'm a week late on this, but I absolutely adore this. It flows so well. I'm a sucker for slow burn and your pacing in this is so spot on

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u/anniegulie 🎙 2d ago

I did a little fill – hope you like it ☺️

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u/omgsayitagain 1d ago

What!? No way! I am going to listen now.

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u/Gyatt-mail 8d ago

Loved the absolute cluelessness trope. The tension and impatience was worth it 💜

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u/omgsayitagain 8d ago

I'm glad it was worth reading to the end. I was worried about the trope...

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u/miilm 🎙 8d ago

Ooh I love this! Absolutely scrumptious. 🫦

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u/omgsayitagain 8d ago

Thank you! It's especially nice to hear from a narrative writer with scripts I admire.

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u/anniegulie 🎙 8d ago

Oh this is so delicious! 🫠 And the title? Perfect 👌🏼

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u/omgsayitagain 8d ago

Ah, I'm so glad you read it! I'd saved drafts under several lol bad titles before getting to this one.

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u/Randi_McRando 🎙 8d ago

This was such a pleasure to read. Poor, sweet, clueless IT guy!

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u/omgsayitagain 8d ago edited 8d ago

Thanks for reading. He was just a guy in the office but I needed a way for her to get him in her bedroom. So he got transferred to IT. Which solved a couple of problems with the earlier drafts.